poem by me,

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by hate_breeder, Feb 13, 2006.

  1. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

    ok poem is completed........
    Its called Hell Gate, i think i am going to make song of it....
    Hell Gate
    One night in Dark forest
    I stumbled upon Ancient passage....
    It lead to hell's gate
    where souls meet true carnage..

    from the dark ages, the gate hails
    created by satanism and hate...
    where ancient evil awaits and
    every sinner's soul finds his fate...

    in the mists of abaddon
    the Devil's paradise of pain..
    fallen angels await their judgement
    where lost souls are slain...

    cursed by the hands of Doom
    a place where souls rust...
    hear the choirs of damnation
    for flesh where demons lust...

    In its heart the Evil dwells
    unholy powers in reign....
    souls are damnated and tortured
    and reincarnated again..

    As I approached the Hell gate,
    It Opened for me....
    A world of pleasure in pain
    damned my soul with fury....
    shsnawada and CrYpTiC_angel like this.
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Nice poem but I somehow feel its incomplete.............maybe.Something is missing.
  3. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

    ya its incomplete
  4. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    do complete it, it's pretty awesome already though!

    reps for u
  6. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Yeah, its really good.

    (Why do it get a feeling that this's cryptic's second id?)
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

  8. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

    aray fallen angels means demons or messengers of satan according to bible
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  9. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    okz..understood what you meant..

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