Phoenix

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Rowl, May 5, 2005.

  1. Rowl

    Rowl New Member

    From the ashes of my expectations
    I rise materialise
    Oh, but all this goes in vain
    here i lie disintegrated again
     
    Rowl, May 5, 2005
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Nice lines.. but sounds incomplete!
    Anything more u would like to add??

    Though watever u said is 100% true!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, May 5, 2005
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  3. Rowl

    Rowl New Member

    Nothing to add
    these lines are what they are
    incomplete in themselves
     
    Rowl, May 14, 2005
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  4. RAKESH_GITS_FAN

    RAKESH_GITS_FAN : <img src="https://indianguitartabs.com/image

    well answered rowl, gr8 come up with more stuff u wait to see them.......
     
    RAKESH_GITS_FAN, May 14, 2005
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