phir sahi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Nov 29, 2005.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Title:- phir sahi

    hum ko kis ke gum ne mara ye kahani phir sahi !
    kis ne toda dil humara ye kahani phir sahi !!

    ek hanssi ne hoontho ke kinare se kaha !
    lab pe muskaa aur ankhoo main ye paani phir sahi !

    hum akee thee hi kab jo vaqut bhi tham ta kabhi
    un ki yaade, meri tanhaii, aur bezabani... phir sahi !

    This one i wrote long back ....cheeeee i dont wanna be a person writing this stuff..takes long hours and lots of head wud lov to hate this one ;).......the next post will definatly be good its under making and the title is "In love with her boobs" ;).....garima u r good but ...leave it ...all ppl here r simply phantastic keep posting !
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    MUUUUUUUUUCH better than what u posted earlier... but from the title to ur next poem, i'm sure it's gonna be jst as crappy as ur previous ones... although this one seems to be an exeption.

    and.. what's with:

  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    u girls always like this roona dhoona ...... hey u gave me an idea isko kuch accha bana deta hoon ...i love deluding the meanings
    for this.... "In love with her boobs" .....garima u r good
    it depends on ur own thinking chahee jaise bhi samajh lo..hahaha

    actually this is what art is for "igniting mind's, evoking imagination " but 1-thing-sure; never seen garima + i dont lie....
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    What a thought on your birthday!!!
    wonder what the other 364 days would be like :think:

    Happy Birthday dude..
    i'm falling short of wishes but wish you happiness
    uhh... i actualy said that.. :shock:

    PS- What do you mean YOU GIRLS by the way??
    guys are equally senti-mental..
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thanx bubbly..abhi if i wake up early my mind goes cazy....

    PS: guys r sentimental and Girls r senti + mental, pata hi nahi chalta kab kab "senti" hai aur kab "mental" :)...vah..vah kyaa likhta hoon main ;)
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hey do see the anti thesis of the same poem...its mast
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice try Madhu....
    by the way...y m i the topic of discussion evrywhr :shock:??
  8. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Garima.. u r good :shock: :shock:

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