phir bhi na hogaa.. till now IGT has seen me writting many things.. tapori style.. comedy.. sher-0-shayari.. hindi, english, marathi.. love.. philosophy.. i have shared my every creativity and hapiness wit IGT tilll now.. i thought this time i should share my sorrows wit you all.. hope my words are enough to describe pain... phir bhi na hogaa.. mohabbat se uth gayaa hai vishwaas tab se jab behrahmi se todaa kisi ne mitti ka gharaundaa.. aaj koi hamareliye.. taj-mahal bhi banaa de hum ko mohabbat pe yakeen phir bhi na hogaa.. chingaari sa pyaar ka junoon tha dil me kisi ne bewafaayi ke samundar se bujha diyaa hai.. aaj koi hamareliye.. suraj bhi jalaa de hamare dil me woh junoon jawaan phir bhi na hogaa.. barson se khaali padi hai pyaasi aankhe tab se jab armaanon ke baadal kisi ne churaaye aankhon se.. aaj koi hamareliye.. sawan bhi bulaa de aankhon ko barsaaye wo surror phir bhi na hogaa.. lut chuke hai saare rang mere daaman se kab ke jab matam thop diya hai kisi ne gehre andheron ka.. aaj koi hamareliye.. indra-dhanush bhi laa de humaare daman ko rang de wo rang phir bhi na hogaa.. --------------------------------------------------------------------- chehre pe chaayi surkh hansi ki lakeer ke peeche.. gumon ki koi silwate si pad gayi hai.. kaash koi hume samaz paaye.. ---------------------------------------------------------------------
abee yaar laat-maar jo huaa bhool ja nahi bhool sakti to seedehe bande pe ja shuru kar smile se confidently style se dhek tuj se pyaar hai dil be karar hai idhar udhar mat kar varna dusar tayiyaar hai !! life is all about loving ........so love on off on off will happen
i am speechless ...the different colours of creativity from you..has given the differnt edge and charm to ur style...............classy approach of your inner turmoil poured out of your heart on paper.......great effort by you and pray your pen never stops churning the best from you .........anger composed very truly and the frustration seems evident...............poetry seems to be portraying your innerself the yearning of never been the same as before and fighting against the inevitable............... good work ..very well and nicely expressed.. rohit astroguru26
: @amanush.. thank you very much.. reading ur words gives me inspiration to write something good.. @abhi... tumko to abhi abhi mohabbat huyi hai.. humko to aapse barson se thi... @sixstringsin... aap reps nahi de sake to kyaa... ur few words are more than enough.. kabhi criticise bhi kariyegaa... @madhuresh... i will think of ur offer..for sure.. :think: @rohit... my every posting here is incomplete without ur comments... just incomplete without you!! @amit... thanks :nw: @madhur... thanks :nw: @every1 in igt... wud like to know comments from u all too...
@zoom.... thankkkkkk youuuuuuu....... @abhi... lawakar ye re... naahitar, malaa mulund la yaavan laagel...
nice of u 2 ask me 2 go thru dis masterpiece of urs. the poem is realy nice & today u r not the only 1 who feels like tht. rep frm me if it permits. tk cre.
^^^thanx Subhro for reminding me to read the poem : A wonderful poem....situation which i went thru & thot the same at that time(ovr that phase now...thank God)...very well expressed....reps from me too if possible...
i tried the composition of last four stanzas...lut chuke hai...with due permission from nimishaa https://www.soundclick.com/starguru26..and search starguru26 rohit astroguru26
bohot khub Nimisha:rock: ..kabhi na sochna ki "mohabbat se uth gayaa hai vishwaas "..mere yaar kyuki na tha woh teri wafa ke kabil aur kar baitha bewafai tumse..
it has to be good if it is from u nimisha :rock: ...... simply gr888 :nw: :nw: :nw: ...... keep them coming more n more n more ...