phir bi na hogaa..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Jan 31, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    phir bhi na hogaa..

    till now IGT has seen me writting many things..
    tapori style..
    comedy..
    sher-0-shayari..
    hindi, english, marathi..
    love..
    philosophy..
    i have shared my every creativity and hapiness wit IGT tilll now..
    i thought this time i should share my sorrows wit you all..
    hope my words are enough to describe pain...


    phir bhi na hogaa..

    mohabbat se uth gayaa hai vishwaas tab se
    jab behrahmi se todaa kisi ne mitti ka gharaundaa..
    aaj koi hamareliye.. taj-mahal bhi banaa de
    hum ko mohabbat pe yakeen phir bhi na hogaa..

    chingaari sa pyaar ka junoon tha dil me
    kisi ne bewafaayi ke samundar se bujha diyaa hai..
    aaj koi hamareliye.. suraj bhi jalaa de
    hamare dil me woh junoon jawaan phir bhi na hogaa..

    barson se khaali padi hai pyaasi aankhe tab se
    jab armaanon ke baadal kisi ne churaaye aankhon se..
    aaj koi hamareliye.. sawan bhi bulaa de
    aankhon ko barsaaye wo surror phir bhi na hogaa..

    lut chuke hai saare rang mere daaman se kab ke
    jab matam thop diya hai kisi ne gehre andheron ka..
    aaj koi hamareliye.. indra-dhanush bhi laa de
    humaare daman ko rang de wo rang phir bhi na hogaa..
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    chehre pe chaayi surkh hansi ki lakeer ke peeche.. gumon ki koi silwate si pad gayi hai.. kaash koi hume samaz paaye..

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  2. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Waah...! Really fantastic !

    Keep it up...!

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ho gayi hain mohaabat tumse................
     
  4. sixstringsin

    sixstringsin ||||||

    Exceptionaly well-written .. well-xpressed!!
    reps if i can
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    abee yaar
    laat-maar
    jo huaa bhool ja
    nahi bhool sakti to seedehe bande pe ja

    shuru kar smile se
    confidently style se

    dhek tuj se pyaar hai
    dil be karar hai
    idhar udhar mat kar
    varna dusar tayiyaar hai !!

    life is all about loving ........so love on off on off will happen :)
     
  6. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    i am speechless ...the different colours of creativity from you..has given the differnt edge and charm to ur style...............classy approach of your inner turmoil poured out of your heart on paper.......great effort by you and pray your pen never stops churning the best from you .........anger composed very truly and the frustration seems evident...............poetry seems to be portraying your innerself the yearning of never been the same as before and fighting against the inevitable...............


    good work ..very well and nicely expressed..


    rohit
    astroguru26
     
  7. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thats amazing....keep writing....
     
  8. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    nice poem keep it up i like it a lot personally
     
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    :p: @amanush.. thank you very much.. reading ur words gives me inspiration to write something good..

    @abhi... tumko to abhi abhi mohabbat huyi hai.. humko to aapse barson se thi... ;)

    @sixstringsin... aap reps nahi de sake to kyaa... ur few words are more than enough.. kabhi criticise bhi kariyegaa...

    @madhuresh... i will think of ur offer..for sure.. :think:

    @rohit... my every posting here is incomplete without ur comments... just incomplete without you!!

    @amit... thanks :nw:

    @madhur... thanks :nw:

    @every1 in igt... wud like to know comments from u all too...
     
  10. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Powerful lines dear...
    U really write well :)
    Keep it up...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  11. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    aayla.......................im comin to sionnnn..... :p:
     
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @zoom.... thankkkkkk youuuuuuu.......

    @abhi... lawakar ye re... naahitar, malaa mulund la yaavan laagel...
     
  13. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    knock knock.... anybody there to comment more????
     
  14. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    nice of u 2 ask me 2 go thru dis masterpiece of urs.
    the poem is realy nice & today u r not the only 1 who feels like tht.
    rep frm me if it permits. tk cre.
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^thanx Subhro for reminding me to read the poem :eek::
    A wonderful poem....situation which i went thru & thot the same at that time(ovr that phase now...thank God)...very well expressed....reps from me too if possible...
     
  16. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

  17. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    bohot khub Nimisha:rock: ..kabhi na sochna ki "mohabbat se uth gayaa hai vishwaas "..mere yaar kyuki na tha woh teri wafa ke kabil aur kar baitha bewafai tumse..
     
  18. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    thats a great recording u have there rohit..
    im honoured to have my poem composed by you..
     
  19. nimitr

    nimitr New Member

    it has to be good if it is from u nimisha :rock: ...... simply gr888 :nw: :nw: :nw: ...... keep them coming more n more n more ...
     
  20. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^^ thanks nimit
     

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