hangs his eyes stuck at me, when i wobble words and angry and comes on obideintly when i need some thing friendly i never tell the whole story, just his part so he plays otherwise he will start animating, in all so obvious ways the touch of some thing insted life, breathing soo near with the wild wild world and from the wild, this wild animal is a dear !
its good, theme-wise......... and grammar's improved! just one thing....... "this wild animal is a dear".........try reamoving "a" from there.......looks nice and meaningful!