paused and ponded..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Oct 1, 2007.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Lecture says..concentrate ..india 2020
    taking all my notes without a look on the qwerty

    Woundring where this shit on my shoes, stuck on
    slides after slides and concepts, prose and con
    Oh ! those villagers illetrates shit along the college road..for reasons so lame
    small kids and women... hell ! without shame..
    GDP.. robust.. all sectors.. graphs up fly high
    attrative..stable..expectaions sky

    "What we need is to look on ground..get stratages very near..
    Class may suggest some change they crisp and very clear
    Do a flyover from Hostles to class room...thats waht i though and was applauded...
    The glass facade of the multi story shows me just it ? ...or more to be paused and ponded...
  2. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

  3. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    Very unusual selection of words, reading 1st line i thot u r saying something abt d poem. bt thanx for writing, i mean its different
    Waise seems to be written in a pissed off mood, kya hua bhai?
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i wait for that day, when i cud really understand ur poems!

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