Passing on.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by silent_dragon, Sep 19, 2005.

  1. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    Truly I ask of you, have you any notice
    as to how much time has changed the
    world, but not itself?
    Have you ever tried to search and go
    deep into its mysteries, its cruelty and its
    cunningness? No...? Then the hour,
    the very minute is before you.

    In my past I too made my folly,thinking
    that I knew time and knew it to its fullness.
    But even after my death, it did not cease to exist.
    Rain drops fell on the just and the unjust alike.
    Voices were cut down like grass just for them
    to grow back more stronger than before. And I
    laid there without giving any help, any hope.

    But even now, after I'm reborn, I see that the
    old is still replaced by the new. The withered
    flower falls down, for a new one to bloom. And
    so remains the greed of men, claiming their
    own lands.But be careful, owning one doesn't
    mean that you even own the clouds which rests
    above him. They are here to move and to move in
    different shapes, not one.

    And now I'm trying to look into the future. And as
    time ticks on, so does my fear of not completing my
    quest. I may become a victor or I may just burn myself
    on the pyre of life, burn myself to my eternal abode.
    It all rests on him.................Time!!!
    CrYpTiC_angel and cYpHeR like this.
  2. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    well written. Kudos.
  3. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    thnx dude!!!
  4. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    beautiful stuff.......
  5. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    huh ,.. .neither light nor dark ... was this indi-pop?

    anyway good stuff :grin:
  6. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    thnx!! and no wonder u have such low reps!!!
  7. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    LOL ...
    those low reps i earned myself ... :grin: ...
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    luvd it... reps 2 ya 4 this!
  9. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    thank you very much for the reps angel!!!:rock::beer:
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hey lovely poem dude
    is that ur pic in the avtar??
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    aaargh gotto spread some more of the reps!!!

    but anyways u may'v got a whole lotta them by now:)
  12. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    thnx for everything and yes thats me in the avatar!!!
  13. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    good something similar to one in your siggy?!!

    @avy - was tat u in da avy??.....hehehe......used flashslider kya??.....damn that avy looks real funny!
  14. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    no man used gifanimator!!!!n thnx for the compliments!!!!:beer:
  15. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned probs.....hmmmm......i too make some lil gifs using animagic software!but enever came up wid anything creative!

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