Par tum na aaye...

Thank you

 

Khush naseeb ho tum itne, ki pyaar tumhara tere pass hai
Gum kya hota hai koi hamse puche, jiska koin na yaar hai

Good poem.

[now i know his name and meaning of your username]

 

somtimes one sided love gives so much energy that either you can destroy your future or can make your life. Its upto you which way to go...

 

Thank you Amit

 

baadi mushkil se pyaar bhaara nagma likhne baitha tha....tumhari poem padi, reverse gear laga and back to same senti song now :shock:

Will post before going to bed...

 

I m so sorry :

 

no problem...

gum ka aur mera bachpan ka nata hai
kabhi vo mujh ko to kabhi mein usko dhoondh hi leta huin

 

Khushiyon ke saaye mein pali badi thi, par waqt ne gham se pyar kara diya
Dhundne shauk se khushiya chali thi, par pyar ne falak se zameen pe utaar diya

 

for good things to happpen.......dont curse the life..........every one needs to have patience.................btw heartfeelings are poured in your poetry.........pain makes you create classic .....like this.......typical yearning for someone and sobbing in the pillow............


pessimist signature varshita...sorry to remind you.......



rohit
astroguru26

 

Pessimist signature :think:
hmm.... i guess thats me :

 

ho ho...ek se baad kar ek...:beer:

 

...enjoyed writing with external clues and contexts !!