Par tum na aaye...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Jan 20, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Guys this is my own creation.... written after ages......The person who inspired me... well you can find his name in the poem and i dedicate it to him only.

    Would like to thank Shalabh... for all the encouragement. I hope i have done justice to what came to my mind.

    Guys be honest and let me know if i should even think of writing again or not.

    Par tum na Aaaye....

    Dil ne zinda rehne ki tamanna chhod di
    par tum na aaye
    Teri ek jhalak ki khwahish ne zindagi mod di
    par tum na aaye

    Mujh main basi teri khusbhoo kahi khone si lagi
    Par tum na aaye
    Vaado aur lafzon ke maiyne badalne lage
    par tum na aaye

    Badal phir jhoom barse, sharad bhi laut aaya
    par tum na aaye
    Saal maheenay dino ke gham ka saaya zehen main bas gaya
    par tum na aaye

    Ankhon main nami ki aadat si pad gayi, Sukh kar woh bhi ashk ban chale
    par tum na aaye
    Khushiyo ke badal chhatt gaye, ghamo ki syahi beh gayi
    par tum na aaye

    Logo ki ungliyon aur zamaane ki nazron ne kiya mere pyar ko badnaam
    par tum na aaye
    Neelami huyi tere pyar, mere khwaabon aur khushiyon ki sareaam
    par tum na aaye

    Takti thak gayi hun raasta tere intezaar ke saaye
    par tum na aaye
    Aaj main rakh hone chali hun, teri yaad ka deepak jalaye
    par tum phir bhi na aaye.......
     
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    "Is tanha dil ko
    ek pyala jam pila do...
    Is tanha dil ko
    ek pyala jam pila do..

    Aapki yaad bhulane ke liye..
    ek pyala jam pila do...

    Aapko yaad aaye na aaye
    Is dil ko bhulane ke liye
    ek pyala jam pila do...
    "

    Good to see that you finally allowed your thoughts to flow..and gathered them on paper! :rock:

    Its beautiful...
    Keep it up and Keep writing...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. flyingbird

    flyingbird New Member

    nice dude
    keep it up
     
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    @Knight_ki_gf -Beautiful poem babe..
    chupa rustom is the right word for u :)

    "Dil ne zinda rehne ki tamanna chhod di
    par tum na aaye
    Teri ek jhalak ki khwahish ne zindagi mod di
    par tum na aaye" --
    :'( ....touching...

    @ Zoom
    "Aap jinke kareeb hote hai..woh bade khush naseeb hote hai" :)..
    do post some more of your hindi poems..

    Take care..
    God Bless..
     
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks bubbly :)
     
  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    frm wer do u get such lovely words...i can hardly write beyond flowers ,trees and skies................
     
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I dunno myself... i had stopped writing way back.... but then someone insisted that i should let the thoughts flow.....
    So here i m !!
     
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    here i m,this is me,
    thers no where else on earth ul rather be!!!!!

    keep writingg....
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you for your encouragement.
    Shall keep posting.
     
  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    beautiful poem!

    hope to see more frm u soon :)
     
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Hopefully if i get someone to nag me to sit down and write !!
    I m too lazy....
     
  12. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Another proof for muh theory of 2 different people in 1 person .. :) .. nice lines varsh .. keep 'em comin ;)
     
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    thank you... i m glad you guys liked it :)
     
  14. netrumpus

    netrumpus New Member

    nice poem.

    a fan of notting hill eh :-d
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Nice poem Varshita...reminds me of one of my poems
    http://www.indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=16176

    i hv been thru this kinda stage sweety...& i hv realised that there is no point loving someone unless u get the same amount of love...or atleast the acknowledmnt bk for ur love...& u cant mk any one Love u....i tried, & i dint succeed...wont like to c u go thru the same thng...
    the more u invest in this the more u'll b hurt....mk a decision...its difficult but one day u'll hv to over come this.

    Luv,
    Garima
     
  16. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

    great poem how does all this stuff come to ur minds? :think:its just impossible 4 me to express my feelings in poetic stuff.very senti.i don't think u shud stop writin.:)
     
  17. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you!!... well yah .. big one.. seen that movie for like more than 20 times and still can watch it again and again :)
     
  18. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you garima...
    Well.. its easy for you people to give suggestions and blah blah...as you have no clue about my situation... or rather have just one end of the story.
    Anyways i dont wanna discuss the feelings involved here.. lets just treat this as a material... nothing else !!
    and by the way... FYI the person for whom this poem was meant... does love me :)
     
  19. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you slash...... well i ve already stopped writing... but then u never know !!
    Life is a mystery and you never know whats instored for you for the next moment :)
     
  20. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :beer: gr888 to know that....All the Best :)
    & btw, suggestions come from experience....& i hope u dont get to gv such kind of suggestions to any1 ....
     

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