Par tum na aaye...

Guys this is my own creation.... written after ages......The person who inspired me... well you can find his name in the poem and i dedicate it to him only.

Would like to thank Shalabh... for all the encouragement. I hope i have done justice to what came to my mind.

Guys be honest and let me know if i should even think of writing again or not.

Par tum na Aaaye....

Dil ne zinda rehne ki tamanna chhod di
par tum na aaye
Teri ek jhalak ki khwahish ne zindagi mod di
par tum na aaye

Mujh main basi teri khusbhoo kahi khone si lagi
Par tum na aaye
Vaado aur lafzon ke maiyne badalne lage
par tum na aaye

Badal phir jhoom barse, sharad bhi laut aaya
par tum na aaye
Saal maheenay dino ke gham ka saaya zehen main bas gaya
par tum na aaye

Ankhon main nami ki aadat si pad gayi, Sukh kar woh bhi ashk ban chale
par tum na aaye
Khushiyo ke badal chhatt gaye, ghamo ki syahi beh gayi
par tum na aaye

Logo ki ungliyon aur zamaane ki nazron ne kiya mere pyar ko badnaam
par tum na aaye
Neelami huyi tere pyar, mere khwaabon aur khushiyon ki sareaam
par tum na aaye

Takti thak gayi hun raasta tere intezaar ke saaye
par tum na aaye
Aaj main rakh hone chali hun, teri yaad ka deepak jalaye
par tum phir bhi na aaye.......

 

"Is tanha dil ko
ek pyala jam pila do...
Is tanha dil ko
ek pyala jam pila do..

Aapki yaad bhulane ke liye..
ek pyala jam pila do...

Aapko yaad aaye na aaye
Is dil ko bhulane ke liye
ek pyala jam pila do...
"

Good to see that you finally allowed your thoughts to flow..and gathered them on paper! :rock:

Its beautiful...
Keep it up and Keep writing...

REgards,
Zooom..!!

 

nice dude
keep it up

 

@Knight_ki_gf -Beautiful poem babe..
chupa rustom is the right word for u

"Dil ne zinda rehne ki tamanna chhod di
par tum na aaye
Teri ek jhalak ki khwahish ne zindagi mod di
par tum na aaye" --
:'( ....touching...

@ Zoom
"Aap jinke kareeb hote hai..woh bade khush naseeb hote hai" ..
do post some more of your hindi poems..

Take care..
God Bless..

 

Thanks bubbly

 

frm wer do u get such lovely words...i can hardly write beyond flowers ,trees and skies................

 

I dunno myself... i had stopped writing way back.... but then someone insisted that i should let the thoughts flow.....
So here i m !!

 

here i m,this is me,
thers no where else on earth ul rather be!!!!!

keep writingg....

 

Thank you for your encouragement.
Shall keep posting.

 

beautiful poem!

hope to see more frm u soon

 

Hopefully if i get someone to nag me to sit down and write !!
I m too lazy....

 

Another proof for muh theory of 2 different people in 1 person .. .. nice lines varsh .. keep 'em comin

 

thank you... i m glad you guys liked it

 

nice poem.

a fan of notting hill eh :-d

 

Nice poem Varshita...reminds me of one of my poems
https://indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=16176

i hv been thru this kinda stage sweety...& i hv realised that there is no point loving someone unless u get the same amount of love...or atleast the acknowledmnt bk for ur love...& u cant mk any one Love u....i tried, & i dint succeed...wont like to c u go thru the same thng...
the more u invest in this the more u'll b hurt....mk a decision...its difficult but one day u'll hv to over come this.

Luv,
Garima

 

great poem how does all this stuff come to ur minds? :think:its just impossible 4 me to express my feelings in poetic stuff.very senti.i don't think u shud stop writin.

 

Thank you!!... well yah .. big one.. seen that movie for like more than 20 times and still can watch it again and again

 

Thank you garima...
Well.. its easy for you people to give suggestions and blah blah...as you have no clue about my situation... or rather have just one end of the story.
Anyways i dont wanna discuss the feelings involved here.. lets just treat this as a material... nothing else !!
and by the way... FYI the person for whom this poem was meant... does love me

 

Thank you slash...... well i ve already stopped writing... but then u never know !!
Life is a mystery and you never know whats instored for you for the next moment

 

:beer: gr888 to know that....All the Best
& btw, suggestions come from experience....& i hope u dont get to gv such kind of suggestions to any1 ....