~Paigaam- The Message~ Muskuraon na itna ki aansu chalak jaye Khushi chaho na itni ki gum ko guroor aa jaye Gum bayaan karne ke liye Pemaane chalakne ka intezar na karo Dil udaas ho jaye to yu chup-chupke aahe na bharo Kaun kisse haasil hua hai yaha Jeena bhi toh hai ik saaza yaha Mushkil hoti hai jub dil ki awaaz kho jati hai Dil kuch kehta hai nazare kuch aur kehelwati hai Ladkhadate hue kuch lafz bhi nikal aaye To do ghadi saansain ruk jaye Na karo intezaar gar hum laut na aaye Na yaad karo hume chahe dhundli si koi yaadein bhi yaad aaye Is duniya ki raangeen-neya na hume bhaye Is sheher ki chaandani hume raas na aaye Taaron se baatain bohot ho chuki Us chaand ko shikyat bhi bohot kar chuki Manzilon pe nazar rakhe hum bohot door chale aaye Phaasle kuch yu badh gaye ki hum bohot aage nikal aaye ---,--'--<@ Good bad or horribly ugly Please gimme your honest comments..: PS-Thanks for reading even if you havent posted your comments
Manzilon pe nazar rakhe hum bohot door chale aaye Phaasle kuch yu badh gaye ki hum bohot aage nikal aaye..... hmm... but all in all this one is a not very good....bubbly y dont u write some thing lovely .... kuch chumma-chaati ..... ched kaani ...bhel puri ;-D
OO,.. now am cryin my ass off,... they say this too right? i mean y only laff ass's out. so senti.. so nice.. so touching,.. so amazing,.. so cool,.. so brilliant,.. so lalala u gettin reps babe. @ madhuresh : chumma chaati,.. aap kidhar se aaye ho? itna chaatne ke liye kyun taras raahe ho? n yes,. u may wanna meet vishwaor his aliass.
thats the logic its self girl ....do it .....explore that world na...how many people said to u ...foolis girl u r not good at this.....or like what akky is telling me tehn see the results ...who knows u here ...u of couse cant do such a thing in practical life,,,??kyaa khayaaal haaaaaaaaaaaii
good one bubbly....you are writting good stuff at this pace..wow... why dont you take one step ahead and record your poem in your voice and send us the link. Mood, emotion and message embedded in the poem can best be communicated using voice. All the best!
wow...its b-e-a-utiful... the title felt like some bollywood movie,but the poem was excellent.. hats-off martina
^ i took 13 steps to nowhere....if u know what i mean....i cant find a way out...cant even post it here ...and i aint writin ne thing othr than what i have written...wat say??:
