Own Composition - "Ishq Hai Beraham" - by Mudit (Atlanta, GA)

Hey Guys,

Am just starting this own composition of mine, completed a rough recording of the first few lines and a part of the music. Named this song "Ishq Hai Beraham".
It has no guitars, and is only about 2 minutes.
Just thought, before recording in the studio, I will get your opinion.

Please listen to the song here:
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=356306&songID=4028462

Would appreciate your comments.

Cheers,
Mudit