one sweet life (who is who) -- my brand new original song and my best work as of yet

hey check it out and offer comments if you will,

it's been a while since i've really dug one of my songs -- I dig this one, and I hope you all do as well.

www.purevolume.com/saurabhvarma
www.soundclick.com/saurabhvarma

take your pick as to which site, i like my purevolume site better, it looks cooler ;

www.purevolume.com/saurabhvarma

and

www.soundclick.com/saurabhvarma


regards,
sv

 

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=337551&songID=4662199

-or-

go to www.purevolume.com/saurabhvarma and click PLAY on the top song.

 

haha... giving the links once would have done it

Jst heard it- Sweet! I really like it...

Liked every part of it although it gets kinda boring after a while... or maybe i'm just tired!

 

gud one but really gets boring az it goes on

 

guess, i'm not that tired

maybe u should make the song shorter..

 

the thing dat makez it boring iz dat itz based on da repeated series of notes...the dhun wat u kall basikally is really da thing which is goin on n on n not changing

 

thanks for the feedback -- yeah it is long and sort of repetitive, its really just a long rough version of the song. i'm sure my final produced one will only be 5 minutes.

but it's not just a repeated string of notes over and over -- there are multiple phrases. there is a chorus and a bridge that are both different sections with completely different chord progressions and melodies. it's probably just not that different because its just me and the acoustic guitar.

but that's also sort of intentional. if you listen to the words, i think you'll see the sense in these statements.

 

any comments ?

going once...

 

www.purevolume.com/saurabhvarma

[one sweet life]

 

lol.. there're already 6 links on this thread to the same song, besides the 1 u jst posted