one more time.. again i am fighting to survive the odds of life in the path of unknown achievement that will unfold to me ......some day shedding tears in front of mirror and looking for the answers of what my bleeding heart seeks... looking for answers to the unspoken bitterness what life has given me to understand.... wish i cud knw what life has to offer me and where my life is taking me..... i am sinking with the fear of being alone talking and listening to myself..... crying over the loneliness that engulfed me day and night and seeing losing the thread of life daily ..... deeper and more stronger..... looking in the mirror...... i am trying to make a braveheart of myself trying to hide the tears but my heart weeps ....... sobbing on my fate walking to survive and die one day ...... once more.... one more time...... rohit
hmm... not really sure if i liked the way u rote it but then again this is the EXACT detail of wat goes inside our heads wen we are caught up in something... so i guess u did a pretty good job
i agree to ir@ ...doest matter the way u wrote it.... not in exact poetic form....the matter in that matters :d . u have done a very good job mate...keep it up! and keep writin!!cheers
again ....sach khunn to...observation is the only thng u have other wise ur a 3rd class poet...and i really dont want to read ur creations...BUT looking in the mirror...... i am trying to make a braveheart of myself u make it impossble to ignore !
