Once Again

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rockin'away, Mar 17, 2005.

  1. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    I stand staring at the same site
    the burning flame, blocking something
    always big, bright, red
    restricting me, giving me limits
    the crackling as it burns away
    a guard stood tall
    watching me every second, minute, hour
    yet one day he calmed down
    the site behind him visible to my eyes
    a new hope, a chance for me to change
    a clear place, no fears for me to fight
    a place for me to start again
    a clean slate, a new leaf
    the chance that doesnt come all the time
    but his anger grows once again
    the flame rises, once again
    i wait, once again
     
  2. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Nicee one .....specially ....the few linessss....... likeddd most.

    a new hope, a chance for me to change
    a clear place, no fears for me to fight
    a place for me to start again
    ................
    i wait, once again
     
  3. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    beautiful work!!;)......i wonder how long will the wait be!!??
     
  4. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    hahaha:).... thanks
     
  5. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    :O ooooooooooooo very nice
     
  6. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    r u prateek?
     
  7. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    yes i am:).....
     
  8. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    good job man. poetry runs in your family i guess.. at least u r not writing about dead fish like your sis :) (kidding)
     

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