Once Again.....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Dec 12, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    As Vishwa suggested a Title....& I promised to write a poem....hope its worth reading :eek::

    What do you think...
    You have succeeded??
    I have lost the game..
    &you have got, what you always wanted??

    Sorry to say,
    That you’ve lost today.
    I had nothing to lose...
    Just think…by putting yourself in my shoes.

    Its only because of You,
    That you’re standing there.
    Now you want someone to Love,
    But now…I’m no-where.

    I always dreamt of being with You,
    Because I Loved You & I still do.
    But I’m tired of expressing my Love now..
    So I’m leaving You & I take this pledge now.

    You wanted me to stop loving,
    But I dint.
    You still want the same,
    Wasn’t that an enough hint?

    Now listen….I’m not gonna stop Loving,
    As this is how I feel I’m Living.
    & this time You won’t be the one who’ll gain..
    I’m sure there would be one day, when I’ll fall in Love….Once Again.


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  2. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    hmmm....quite good .. :) keep it up :)
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^hey thanx bud
     
  4. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Garima I liked it more than Not Again... really... u deserve a much better guy than Nishant.. if i were in his place.. i wud have never hurt such a beautiful heart..

    keep smiling.. :)
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    not bad..... once again GOOD JOB! :)
     
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Vish ...thanx yaar...so very much

    @Hira....thanx to u too
     
  7. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Am sooo touched :cry1:

    Are u those irritatin kinda chics who bother some innocent guys all the time, n when they dont pay much heed to yr chow chow,.... then u go all sad n start writing poems? Juzz wonderin,.... i dont ask these kinda Q's, but since u r soooo proud of publicising yr so called relationship,... n am bored at 2.53am n all, I think u'd be overwhelmed to answer my query.
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    if u r that bored....y r u even bothered to read them.??? <contrasting>

    &by the way....it wasnot evn a relationshp.......
    & please STOP wondering for ME.....

    oh yeah.......i dont feel the need of answering ur so called query....
     
  9. peaceful_words

    peaceful_words New Member

    very nice....you do write good poems....good job....
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^thanxx yaar :grin:
     
  11. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    gary, isnt this tht 8 yr relation wala guy?????.....good poem...feelins express hua .....pen is the best to write down the feelins....and ul get a better guy....nah...best guy........
     
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thanx abhi...& yeah...its the same guy
    u kno wat...i feel like thanking him now...as cos of him i landed up here..among u ppl & it feels so nice to b a part of this small family :)
     
  13. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    ya this is a nice little world of ours and lovely poeple.........
     
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    he he...yeah...we :rock: & :rule:
     

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