On the edge

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Rocean, Feb 19, 2012.

  1. Rocean

    Rocean New Member

    I wanna move on,
    and leave everythin behind...
    But im so lost in love,
    just waiting for u to find...
    I'm standing on the edge,
    trying to break my fall...
    Coz I've got nothing to lose,
    and u've got it all...!!

    Letting go everythin behind,
    as gravity beholds me...
    It always ached in from within,
    its sad u could never see...
    The real me...
    Always standin on the edge,
    tryin to catch u as i fall...
    Coz u'd never did care,
    even when i did it all...!!
    Vader and Super-Admin like this.
  2. ok.. flow of un-audited emotions

    i liked it keep posting
  3. wylder

    wylder New Member

    Nice lines... Keep at it and post some more.
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    it could be a great song...i liked it.. :)
  5. Rocean

    Rocean New Member

    Thank u everyone for ur comments n feedback.... Will b posting in a few more... Stay tuned... : )
  6. Super-Admin

    Super-Admin Administrator Staff Member

    Rocean - Loved it ! ... Thanks for this beautiful one :)
  7. Vader

    Vader New Member

    this is actually great work
  8. Rocean

    Rocean New Member

    Thanks adm n vader.. : )

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