Oh Yeah !!! ( one more try in erotica )

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vishwa_81us, Dec 29, 2005.

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  1. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    HIDDEN HILLS ?????? LMAO LMAO LMAO :RollLol: :RollLol:
     
    notty_lad, Dec 29, 2005
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  2. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    ^^ yeah,.. hehe,.. seems like we have another Vishwa in the making. :p:
     
    akkyy21, Dec 29, 2005
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  3. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist


    Defamation ^^ i'm gonna sue u for tht dude. u just abused me !!
     
    knight_guitar, Dec 29, 2005
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  4. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    OOps,..... r u defamable? Dint knw,......
     
    akkyy21, Dec 29, 2005
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  5. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    Rofl u calling me vishwa, and u think i'm gonna leave u like that.. i'm gonna sue u for 50,000 million bucks ..
     
    knight_guitar, Dec 29, 2005
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  6. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    C'mon,.. give that guy a break... he aint that bad either.
     
    akkyy21, Dec 29, 2005
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  7. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    hey it's ok man.. u don't need to take that serious
     
    knight_guitar, Dec 29, 2005
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  8. PakPride

    PakPride New Member

    ...its good for a laugh...im speechless (not in a good way)..um plz dont attemp again...practice wont make perfect... :S...........but then again thats my opinion:)
     
    PakPride, Dec 29, 2005
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  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Huh !!!!!

    wat u guys think.. i m a professional writter ?? Khushwant singh !!!!

    are yaar.. that poem was not hours in making.. i made it in 120 secs.. i know i can write far far better than this.. go n read my other poems.. that was pure fun.. i admit that was vulgur not P.ORN !!!! people trying to say me read english !!! wtf....

    if anyone has the guts to write a good erotic poem.. then i challenge come and post here... i will give him 100 000 pts.. and ya if u don't hv then just f.uck off..


    I have my own attitude and don't need anyones.. :mad:
     
    vishwa_81us, Dec 30, 2005
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  10. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    what a poetry!!!!
     
    anshphenomenon, Dec 30, 2005
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  11. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    this thread is hillarious....:RollLol:
     
    Hardik, Dec 30, 2005
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  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    it starts with whispers
    but sometimes words get disperse

    and then distance to reduce
    soft caress to seduce

    rose petals of lips
    tender curves to kiss

    black magic of the whorls
    hair in entagled curls

    every heat to burn
    every pleasure to yearn

    the curves that tease
    their bareness to please

    in a cascade of a moan
    the passion gets grown

    with the silk of the thighs
    taking to the highs

    the crumpled bedsheets
    and hunger for heats

    a virgin desire
    deep down playing with fire

    a secrete way of pleasure
    a moisture of love to treasure

    mesmerising
    tantalizing
    can not stop pleasure that gets rising...

    and then...
    depth like rivers....
    pool of shivers......
    and ocean of quivers................
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    nimisha, Dec 30, 2005
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  13. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^vishwa give her 100,000 pts now :p:
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Dec 30, 2005
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  14. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    @nimisha .. juz too good .. :)

    @cryptu .. .. .. .. .. ..
     
    notty_lad, Dec 30, 2005
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  15. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    What about erotic gore?? That needs more guts (and other body parts too)
     
    shsnawada, Dec 30, 2005
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  16. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned


    100 000 pts given to NIMISHA.. for that excellent work..

    I do wat i say.. I wud also like others who were commenting to particapate.. Hai Dum !!!!!


    Ok.. I m going to come to ur Room Nimisha.. Teach me Erotica.. more.. :p:


    *kidding *


    Anyway wish all of u a very happy new year ....
     
    vishwa_81us, Dec 30, 2005
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  17. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    ^^ Answer my question. What if the poem intentionally had the opposite effect? How many points do in get? (quite serious actaully :p:)
     
    shsnawada, Dec 30, 2005
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  18. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    no words for u vishwaa... just THANKS....
     
    nimisha, Dec 30, 2005
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  19. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    lol

    i guess no one can beat nimisha in poetry ;)
     
    .:SpY_GaMe:., Dec 30, 2005
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  20. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^I can beat nimisha in "BAD" poetries :p:
     
    notty_lad, Dec 30, 2005
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