Official Poem Thread

Discussion in 'The ChitChat Lounge' started by DesiPride143, Nov 17, 2004.

  1. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    To the administration,
    i want to make an special request, don't you think (administrator) that we should have an official forum for the poems.

    well here is mine, i just wrote it cause i was getting bored. i m at work (doesn't working sux)

    nigahe hai ya hai vo kuch aur
    jinme dekh kar, na dekh pata hu
    nahi sun pata hu koi shor

    Hoton ko itna na sajaya karo
    Unme eitni mithas na milaya karo
    jinhe mein chahu pina hardam
    vo ras, vo mithas na milaya karo

    balon ko sajati ho tum aise
    jinhe dekh kar mann hota hai
    bata nahi sakta kaise
    Kelu mein un zulfon ke saath
    din ka ujala aur raath ka saaya
    ho jaise

  2. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    Tum ho paas baitei mere
    mein hu tumhare baju mein
    eik nazar to dekh lo
    eis aasiq ki aankho mein

    tum ho baiti
    ek aisi ada mein
    jise mein dekhu
    raton ko
    sapno ki raho mein
    gujartein hai din aur
    raatein meri
    teri khubsurat yaadon mein

    har ghadi dekhata hu
    chehra tumhara
    hakikat mein nahi to kya
    dekhata hu spaney mein yaara
    aur usi ki vazah se
    zinda hai yeh pyaar tumhara

    tum baiti ho paas mere
    phir bhi nahi dekh sakta yeh
    kubsurat chehra tumhara
    lahra do un gani zulfo ko
    jinme chupa hai
    chehra ka nur tumhara

  3. Reem

    Reem Banned

    I am with DesiPride143.. good suggestion..a special forum for poems :protest:
  4. Menon

    Menon New Member

    I've written some pretty intense stuff man..I mean the kind you read and take a look back down and say, "Ayyyy..I've been there..I hear you!" Half of it I can't find, the other half I might've to type down from Hard Copy..
    So Til Then, you guys keep goin
  5. skaw

    skaw snooze

    desipride143.. i jus love dat accent !!! gujarjatein hain .. shooo shhueat :)

    btw nice stuff ... i like it :p
  6. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    thank you skaw....i'll post more as i go home, at work right now...

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