Oct'29'2005-Saturday (New Delhi)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Nov 4, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    On this specified date....New Delhi saw the face of Terror...as we were about to celebrate the festival of lights 'Diwali'....there were so many families which lost the 'light' of their lives....forever...
    This is the first poem I wrote....there is one more which I'll be posting later on...

    A perfect weekend…
    That I thought is on,
    Relatives & cousins at my place,
    And we were laughing on & on.

    Humanity is safe, is what I had in my mind,
    Until we decided to switch the TV on,
    And at that bloody moment,
    I wished I should have gone blind

    Faces full of tears,
    Screams were the only sound
    Terror on everybody's face
    Blood was lying all over the ground

    My mind was boiling with anger
    Eyes were filled with tears
    And the Heart was shouting aloud
    Oh God! Are you Here???

    [I might edit it going further]
    Hardik likes this.
  2. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I wouldn't like to comment on the piece because of the sentiments attached to it. Most of us feel the same way probably.
  3. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    @garima - you are soo sentimental as i am! but believe or not you are gonna fnd this poem silly later on when you read it! say abt 1 yr later!:eek:: jus like bjr stated!:nw:
  4. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    nice one.,...

    but someone post smthing on the July 26th Mumbai flood debacle...it was worse
  5. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    No. I never said that.
  6. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    well, maybe i took it that way....anywayz,,,!

    check out garima's siggy ....she says terrorists are like cowards to me! :RollLol:
  7. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    nice one ...

    so this is the one .... yeah ... it was too bad ... me landing .. n gettign this news ...

    cause of my agnosticism
  8. shak

    shak Harrr!

    yeah very nice garry ...
    but this one lacks a bit of flow .. i guess you were in a hurry .. or overcome by emtions ..
    anyway .. yet another gooood one from you .. tho not among the best
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    thanks guys....
    i just wrote it outta depression...dint notice about the flow or the rythm

    @devil...no way, m not gonna laf @ this aftr a yr or 2 cos i neva mk fun of anybody's emotions....let it b me or anyone else...
  10. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    ^^rocking devil is gone!!!from IGT
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    good to have ya back! nice poem (lacks a bit of flow though)...
  12. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    hey nice poem garima....reps 4 you!!:)

    @anshphenomenon.........RD banned??......:shock:whoa!!!wonder whos next.......
  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Kab? Kyun? kahan? kaise?
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @angel, hardik .....thanx yaar
  15. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    gone a couple of days back....refer to the IGT animation thread in cc lounge for details on the reason

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