obituaries....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Jul 1, 2007.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    Given pain to mother
    When born…….
    and grew
    as spoilt brat
    With non sense attitude
    and making everyone go sad with his antics……


    Adolescence brought
    more misery for the family
    The society cursed his upbringing….
    Mother never said anything against
    me
    as he was blue eyed boy of family…..


    Self-indulgent
    and egoist with each breath…….
    Shameless guy creating
    world of pain to others,
    Hatred
    he passed to all with each breath
    Who tried to love him
    He did not make any one smile
    …not a single person

    wisdomless,
    false promising,
    lies,
    heartless,
    sympathyless moron
    can be the few character
    with that he
    can be remembered....

    Thank God
    he left this world,
    a worthless
    soul
    leaving not a single
    amount of good memories
    to whom he met till he lived………

    good to see him
    finally
    resting forever
    giving everyone peace of mind……

    good he died atleast
    his mother will be happy now….

    I read my obituaries
    What people said about me…….


    woke up to find myself
    never to be same again....




    rohit
     
  2. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    hmmm... good poem but i THINK it cud have been better by adding just BIT of positivity... then again these r JUST ma thoughts... good work though! :)
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    these are pathetic thoughts ...

    good he died atleast
    his mother will be happy now….

    this is like impossible

    Ps: i dnt need reps !
     

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