Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Oct 30, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo


    I want to write something
    But don’t know what to write
    It’s difficult to choose words
    To express emotions, which are not so bright

    But even then…I take this paper & a pen
    To write something which cannot be given “perfect Ten”

    From where to start is a Question now
    I need to fill this space…but don’t know how

    Even then I stat off….with Nothing
    With a hope that it might make up to ‘something’

    There are no thought in my mind
    But anyhow I need to kill this lonely time

    There would be some who’ll be tortured
    Once they read this….
    I a way I’ll be committing a crime
    By making them read nothing…thus wasting their time

    Some might say ‘it’s not bad’
    For some of them it would be a difficult test
    But to tell you the truth
    Writing something with no thoughts to write about
    Is altogether a different zest just got tortured :p:...​
    vini likes this.
  2. garima........ told you not to watch shahrukh movies.. nahin mani..dekhi teri thoughts bhi gayab ho gayi.. :(
    neways ... good one.. writing a poem without thought :shock: its not easy...
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^ movie dekhne se pehle likhi thi :p:
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    it's ok.. i forgive u
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    it's cute though, if ur 4 yrs old or smthng :p
  6. vini

    vini Repeat Offender!!
    u wrote a poem when u were gearing up to write a poem..if u know what i mean.

    i liked that wit..reps for it :) oh that just rhymed!
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    my mind has stopped working cos of loads of dint actually get it...:eek::
    thanx for forgiving anyway :p:

    @Vini...Thank yo :grin:
  8. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    not me.
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    hmmmm....cant figure out head or toe of this reply too...
    thnk therez smthng seriously wrong with me...nothng is mking sense to me today :cry2: :cry2:
  10. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^Phew...thank YOU for the explaination & good that u dint get torture...i thnk i need to thnk fr tht Thank you...
  12. shak

    shak Harrr!

    what?!! why are you trying to rhyme garry!! no no no no mon ami .. keep it rustic kepe it raw .. keep it flowing with emotions ..

    3/10 for you ...
  13. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    sahi hai ..aisa likhne ke kiye liver chahiye biduu...u rock
  14. Black~Magic

    Black~Magic New Member

    I totally feel like that when i write sumthing i have to get distracted then come up with a great idea.. this awesome i hope well for u in ur writing its very awesome​
  15. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Hey this doesnt match the standard of ur earlier poems:eek::
    They used to really touch the heart..and this comes nowwhere near:annoyed:

    N e way , it gives respite from the normal style....but revert back to ya old genre..that was really kewl..

    Hope the old garry comes back soon:rock:
  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hmmm…Thanks Shak, Born to tab for the honest feedback…
    @Madhuresh, black magic…. Thanks :) :)

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