Not again....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Dec 8, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Wrote this one today...while thinking about someone
    Please do comment....good/bad/ugly...watevr it is :)

    Oh God...not again,
    I have already been through this.
    Now I can't take this pain.

    I asked You to take this heart away,
    So that I don't feel,
    What I am feeling today...

    Am I going insane?
    Can't believe what's happening to me..
    Am I falling in Love again?

    I have no words to say,
    Completely shattered by my Love,
    For whose crime Am I suppose to pay?

    I'm not going to kill myself again.
    Oh God...either take this heart away,
    Or grant me a wish, so that I can go insane

    (though m no better than an insane person:p: )
  2. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    impressive ..!
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^thank you :)..!
  4. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Ehm...nice poem. (what else can i say). nice
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) :) thanx....
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Congrats Garyy...

    Finally u r in love again.. but who is that someone.. is he from IGT ??
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    girl it's never too late to move on :beer: i'm glad u r....

    and if u r actually fallin in love again.. i hope it wont be one-sided!! good luck!

    gr8 poem btw :)

    i actually wrote smthng on sjmilar lines months ago... but lost it, like most of my old poems
  8. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    hmmm...scared of falling in love again.???
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    I think we shud be optimistic always.. poem title can be ONCE AGAIN.. instead of Not again..
  10. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    good one Garima......well....same ur poem completely depicts my present situation.....thats why it touched me.....good one ...keep it up
  11. shak

    shak Harrr!

    i agee with vishwa .. lets call it once again .. and add a smiley :)
    oo garry who is he?? tell mee tell mee!! ... lol .. ok i'll be serious
    nice one bud .. but still .. why be so low? .. i thought this marked your new begining? atleast i thought so .. i am still sooo excited .. and want to see yu the same .. this time it wont be like last time .. I KNOW!! (u know what i mean by that <)
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thank u soooooo very much guyz...

    @Vishwa....too early to open my mouth :) @once again...:think: wont rename this one as it wont suit...but sure wud rite a new one with that name...:grin:

    @Trish.... keeping mah fingers crossed bud...:eek::

    @Shubhank....yeah bud...u too r rite...m damn scared...once bitten na.:shutup:

    @Gaurav...all the best to u...hope u get thru this situation...unhurt :)

    @Shak...thanks for being optimist for me...but u kno how confused i am...but will sure come outta this confusion :)
  13. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Hey Garima .. i mean .. U make me feel so special .. i'm in tears right now .. u wrote all this for me .. let everyone know .. I'm here for u *HUG*
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^^ Oh I wish i cud say yes....but 'no' :grin:....agle janam me pakka ;) *HUG*
  15. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^ Muh hunny pie .. so ur feeling shy in front of everyone ha?? its ok ;)
  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Ohho....hez not in just chillllll....bola na agle janam me pakka ...
  17. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    wow!...the poem was awesome...reader can easily follow what you are feeling in the poem...ey....keep the title as not again...because it fits the mood of the poem...well i hope this new love brings you the joy you deserve....
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^thanx Divy :)

Share This Page