Wrote this one today...while thinking about someone Please do comment....good/bad/ugly...watevr it is Oh God...not again, I have already been through this. Now I can't take this pain. I asked You to take this heart away, So that I don't feel, What I am feeling today... Am I going insane? Can't believe what's happening to me.. Am I falling in Love again? I have no words to say, Completely shattered by my Love, For whose crime Am I suppose to pay? I'm not going to kill myself again. Oh God...either take this heart away, Or grant me a wish, so that I can go insane (though m no better than an insane person: )
girl it's never too late to move on :beer: i'm glad u r.... and if u r actually fallin in love again.. i hope it wont be one-sided!! good luck! gr8 poem btw i actually wrote smthng on sjmilar lines months ago... but lost it, like most of my old poems
good one Garima......well....same ur poem completely depicts my present situation.....thats why it touched me.....good one ...keep it up
i agee with vishwa .. lets call it once again .. and add a smiley oo garry who is he?? tell mee tell mee!! ... lol .. ok i'll be serious nice one bud .. but still .. why be so low? .. i thought this marked your new begining? atleast i thought so .. i am still sooo excited .. and want to see yu the same .. this time it wont be like last time .. I KNOW!! (u know what i mean by that <)
Thank u soooooo very much guyz... @Vishwa....too early to open my mouth @once again...:think: wont rename this one as it wont suit...but sure wud rite a new one with that name...:grin: @Trish.... keeping mah fingers crossed bud...: @Shubhank....yeah bud...u too r rite...m damn scared...once bitten na.:shutup: @Gaurav...all the best to u...hope u get thru this situation...unhurt @Shak...thanks for being optimist for me...but u kno how confused i am...but will sure come outta this confusion
Hey Garima .. i mean .. U make me feel so special .. i'm in tears right now .. u wrote all this for me .. let everyone know .. I'm here for u *HUG*
wow!...the poem was awesome...reader can easily follow what you are feeling in the poem...ey....keep the title as not again...because it fits the mood of the poem...well i hope this new love brings you the joy you deserve....
