just logged in after a LONGGGGGG time but i gotta say UR POETRY IS STILL REMARKABLE! ab mein aur kya bolo...*speechless* reps
Garima... I have read your earlier poems aswell, but this one didnt come up to the standards set by you. You got too caught with the rhyming that you didnt pay much much attention to the words or structure per se. chorry
@Hira Thanks @Varshita.....one shud neva b sorry while speaking out what one exactly feel...Thank You so much for the honest opinion....i know everything that i right cannot be perfect...and as definition of 'beautiful' keeps changing frm person to person its obvious that some wud like a particular poem & some might not...but its always good to know whats lacking & where so that it can be corrected....Thanks again Cheers :beer:
