Kitna ajab sa, par haseen ehsaas hai, Dil to har pal tujhse milne ki pyaas hai. Jab se tumne mujhse apna dil pher liya, Kaise kahoon,mera dil kitna udaas hai. Aate jaate teri khushboo choo jaati hai, Tab hi aati meri saans mein saans hai. Yaad jab thaama the tumne mera haath, Phir se thaam lo mujhe,yehi aas hai. Jab jab dil hone lagta hai gumsum,bejaar, Lagta hai jaise tu yahin aas paas hai. ********************************************************** I am still thinking about the title.......can anyone suggest me one......always welcome.
were u confused while u were writing this? cos its quite evident you couldnt decide where u wanted to go. It doesnt seem complete .. no wonder you couldnt think of a title. last line could have been : Jab jab dil hone lagta hai gumsum,bejaar, Lagta hai jaise tu yahin aas paas hai Forceful writing?
@ har1s ....Thnaks for the response...will try to be better @knight_ki_gf ....No....yaar...nothing is forceful with me.....may be this what I wanted to write....however....liked ur suugesstion.....Thanks buddy...I am gona edit it....
