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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by apurbajd, Mar 5, 2006.

  1. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    *** Dont know why I wrote dis :eek:: and no title in my mind***

    Known this pain since long
    been through this many times
    they are so intimate now
    that pain and happiness lost their meaning
    or may be I have just lost all feelings.

    laughed at myself and then cried
    but never wished I died
    As I started loving it somehow
    and got addicted..

    So much ....
    I wait for my heart to ache
    I love it when something burns inside me
    I love it when something inside me commands me
    to get going, to get wasted , to get sick

    And I search for a reason, for a way
    to justify myself
    and prove my point
    And I search for a reason, for a way
    Worthy enough
    To crucify myself.
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i feel somethings not written
    something you thought about but never put it to paper...

    its kinda good...raw feelings..
    but jus gives me a feeling of incompleteness..
    there is some kinda conflict and a resolution..which doesnt seem that good:shock:
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Talk about masochistic pleasures !!
    Liked your poem in bits and pieces. But anyways... a good attempt !! :)
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    I like it...

    You can actually get drunk on pain!
  5. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^^thnx for reading people .......

    yeah it sounds kinda incomplete to me also ......hope the next one will be better ;-)
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    good poem....
    can very well realte as i myself was in pain....
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    nice attempt

    "Known this pain since long
    been through this many times
    they are so intimate now"

    is it intimate or u meant intense.

    irrespective of that good attempt.
  8. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^thnx nimisha & pampoosh............

    @walk.... no, i meant intimate .....
  9. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Damn nice :beer:

    Looks a bit incomplete here and there but who cares? It was good anyway.

    I love the darker side...
  10. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Dammit, i miss the good ones, masochistic theme, it was a tad plain the beginning but developed into a beautiful whole poem by the end, i loved it :grin: Keep writing using dark(er) themes.
  11. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Heehee, scaring the sheep :grin:
  12. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    lol, you sick mind :shock: :p:
  13. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    ^ No. I meant that people would get scared.
  14. Loopy Fruit

    Loopy Fruit New Member

    Ahan! My kinda poem!

    Good work, mate.

    Let me see if I can find something to post in this forum.
  15. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    thnx shsnawada... Yeah its kinda incomplete bt good 2 knw u liked ;-)

    @distu... thnax bro for the inspiring words .........

    @Loopy, thnx man ..... post ur poem soon ;-)
  16. Loopy Fruit

    Loopy Fruit New Member

    I did, infact i posted two! go read them :D
  17. Loopy Fruit

    Loopy Fruit New Member

    Someone please teach me how to make smilies. I just know ":)" and ";)"

  18. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    When you want to say "lol", use this: :Laughing:

    Damn, these gaonwalo....

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