*** Dont know why I wrote dis : and no title in my mind*** Known this pain since long been through this many times they are so intimate now that pain and happiness lost their meaning or may be I have just lost all feelings. laughed at myself and then cried but never wished I died As I started loving it somehow and got addicted.. So much .... I wait for my heart to ache I love it when something burns inside me I love it when something inside me commands me to get going, to get wasted , to get sick And I search for a reason, for a way to justify myself and prove my point And I search for a reason, for a way Worthy enough To crucify myself.
i feel somethings not written something you thought about but never put it to paper... its kinda good...raw feelings.. but jus gives me a feeling of incompleteness.. there is some kinda conflict and a resolution..which doesnt seem that good:shock:
Talk about masochistic pleasures !! Liked your poem in bits and pieces. But anyways... a good attempt !!
^^thnx for reading people ....... yeah it sounds kinda incomplete to me also ......hope the next one will be better ;-)
nice attempt "Known this pain since long been through this many times they are so intimate now" is it intimate or u meant intense. irrespective of that good attempt.
Damn nice :beer: Looks a bit incomplete here and there but who cares? It was good anyway. I love the darker side...
Dammit, i miss the good ones, masochistic theme, it was a tad plain the beginning but developed into a beautiful whole poem by the end, i loved it :grin: Keep writing using dark(er) themes.
thnx shsnawada... Yeah its kinda incomplete bt good 2 knw u liked ;-) @distu... thnax bro for the inspiring words ......... @Loopy, thnx man ..... post ur poem soon ;-)
