NO TITLE .....Guyz....I am back...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by anum324, Sep 7, 2006.

  1. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Kaash ! Main apni tasveer badal paati!
    Garm hawaon ka kabhi rukh badal paati!

    Yun to humne laakh jatan kiye magar,
    Har aahat par jaga kiye magar,
    Waqt ne chupke se jalaya aashiyaan,
    Jal gayi main bhi, ho gayi dhuaan dhuaan…..

    Kaash ! Main apni tasveer badal paati!
    Garm hawaon ka kabhi rukh badal paati!

    Hare k kadam badhaya aashaon ke saath,
    Ummed ne bhi choda nahi mera haath,
    Chalte rahe manzil paane ki chaah mein
    Khatm ho na jaaye safar bas ek aah mein…..

    Kaash ! Main apni tasveer badal paati!
    Garm hawaon ka kabhi rukh badal paati!

    Taiyyar hun,jeevan path pe chalne ke liye,
    Haath mein utha li hai talwaar jang jeetne ke liye,
    Harna nahi hai aadat, yeh sabko batana hai
    Kuch bhi ho yeh jang jeetkar dikhana hai…..

    Haan ! Main apni tasveer badal rahi hun!
    Garm hawaon ka bhi rukh badal rahi hun!:dance:
     
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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    That was a positive one Akanksha...i really liked the way u turned ur poem to end up at a positive note...

    reps for ya...:beer:

    & yeah...have a nice weekend ;)
     
  3. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^^LOL...Mohsin tu bhi na.....
     
  5. Bleeding Guitar

    Bleeding Guitar New Member

    hahah nice one Lad
    and what a way to come back heh.
     
  6. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Hmm..good job! :think:

    but why no title..any specific reason??

    anyways reps
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    accha tha !
     

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