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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by aryasridhar, Jul 2, 2012.

  1. aryasridhar

    aryasridhar New Member

    Before you read the stuff i wrote a few things to say
    NO I AM NOT DEPRESSED
    NO I DIDNT LOSE ANYTHING
    NO I AM NOT SUICIDAL
    LOL

    I wrote this loooooong back.......on my Blackberry, totally forgot about it and now here it is....

    Windows are broken
    Glass hanging out my flesh

    Life is scattered
    Feelings are lonely

    Moments are darker
    Darker than the night

    Bottles are empty
    Blood out on the floor

    War is imminent
    price paid by
    Innocent lives

    Happiness is mystery
    Among
    Cold blooded animals

    Are we real
    Do we live
    Do we care
    Do we feel

    Doesn't matter to me.
    As long as peace prevails
     
  2. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    you could even catch a bullet from the peace-keeping force
     
  3. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    What does that mean???
     
  4. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    I somehow felt that the story is about some sort of peacekeeping that is actually using violence ...
    Perhaps I am wrong ... anyway Poems are not really my forte.
     
  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Even the hero gets a bullet in the chest
     
  6. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    Now whatever little bit i understood after reading earlier I am all the more confused now after reading ur view points...
     
  7. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    LOL
    Double LOL.
     
  8. aryasridhar

    aryasridhar New Member

    Wow...nice to see these comments.......however, would like to know what you guys think of the poetry though?
     
  9. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Lines are awesome bro..
     
  10. aryasridhar

    aryasridhar New Member

    Thanks a ton bro..... :)
     
  11. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    Its written well dude!!!
     
  12. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Poetry is good, but what made you think people would ask if you're suicidal?
     
  13. aryasridhar

    aryasridhar New Member

    People did ask me after reading another poetry that i had written earlier......in another post.
     
  14. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Oh..lol...ohk...
     

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