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^^thanks! :beer:

 

wow..awesome..you write wonderful my dear:rock:

 

Not knowing the power you hold
You completely changed my inner world
You moved mountains within my soul

wow....its excellent....

 

I like the way your poems convey a dark meaning...Great play with words

 

Thank you

 

^ What dark meaning does it have? Enlighten me on that.

 

she probably means the shades of darkness (not much in this one, yeah, but still..) in most of my poems.

 

But got a question:

EDIT: I'd better shut up. : The first and last time i looked at a poem from that angle. Sorry.

 

cryp, i love this shit!!! :nw:

 

Wonderful, sistah Trish!!!!!!1
i like the way how the poem flows....when u read it, it kinda feels like a song..more like a rap song...reallly really enjoyed reading it...and this, is something different as well... :beer: :beer: Reps if permits, otherise..hugs and encouragement:beer:

 

Ouch, that must (unintenionally) hurt. :Worried:



(or so, i guess)

 

what was that? :grin: I'm curious now...

Thanks raff!

 

I know you know what made me write this poem and u actually know what made me write each and every word

Thanks sistah!

I chose to ignore that bit :grin:

 

Do you really want a theory/technique question? I dont think so.

 

Well, you can ask, but I dont know about such things so I might not be able to answer :