I just came up with this this on lonely night...........nights just facinate me & it is one of my favourate times.........just wanted to write somethin about it.....hope u guys like it........so tell me what u'll think of it....and hey i wanna hear somethin abt my signature also Silence of the night, A muse or evil delight Wrenching shadows all around A wonderful and deadly sight Just voices in the dark playing their tunes The hissing of the wind so profound A dogma, unwavering beliefs, The ghosts and the thieves Sound of silence talks No one else is talking here Thoughts brewing in the head And the unfolding fear So alluring, so pretentious Magic here, tragic there Everything about this night Makes u long, makes u fonder Bringing on the wilder side Bringing on mystery Nights will come & they will hide Most fascinating time it’s got to be.
its good.. but feel like you were on the brink of rambling in the last part " Nights will come & they will hide Most fascinating time it’s got to be." you could've added something more to this otherwise..overall its good.. i like the first stanza..
Loved the lines in bold. Those lines really bring forth the beauty and mystery of the night. Wonderful poem EDIT: What's with the title "Night-angle"
their's a word in hindi anglebazee ..........im sure this angle has smthing to do with it....... ya poem is good :beer: ye RAAT........vo video dekha hai mast lagti hai bandi...
Hey thanx everyone.....sachoo...bubly( i do apreciate the constructive criticism).......#iR@, madhuresh.......nimisha ( u do write well)....and crptic u too The title Night-angle...............it just means perception of the night.as to how it is in the night........the title just seemed catchy
