new track.....few words

hi...

posting the new track just a few lines.....tune dil mein...and aankhon se....


plz comment......the wordings are little.....



thanks for giving me appreciation for posting the track of nimishaa's poetry.....through the composition....


rohit
astroguru26



the link..is..............https://www.soundclick.com/starguru26

 

still no reply.........not pleasing and soothing i feel............the tunes.....

tell me the shortcomings ..suggestions are always inspiration...


rohit
astroguru26

 

goood,very filmi though

 

u need to improve on that.... n there is lot of scope for improvement there...
make a complte song outta it... it will sure look beautiful..