New Original - Columbia

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by mymusicmyguitar, Apr 14, 2012.

  1. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

  2. guitarplayer729

    guitarplayer729 New Member

    i didnt felt anything wrong with the end
    everything was good
     
  3. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    The ending is a bit abrupt..With the last tapping...and then the last clean delayed riff...something is missing......just not connecting...Could be better...Thanks for listenin!!! :)
     
  4. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Very nice, good guitaring and well composed, as it sounds good.
    These are some of the ingredients for a good composition!
    Although there are some things to be improved.
    The most important thing is the timing, especially when playing the fast notes, the timing is not perfect, so you have to work to improve this.This isn't to offend you man, just some indications about the things you should improve.
    Another thing, if you want to boost up the song, just add a bass line, you'll be surprised what a bass can do with a track!
    About the ending, it is simple but nothing wrong about it, there is no need to have an complicated outro.
    Take care man and keep posting!!!
     
  5. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    thanks @Keoraf. Yes m aware of the part where the timing is off. Actually was suppose to pick the note on the off beat and didnt do that So had to rush thru the rest of the part. And i was way to bored to record again. Thanks for pointin it out in no way Its offendin Infact these points are a good way to improve ones playin
     
  6. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I like this a lot even though you've made mistakes in the playing...the musical ideas are really nice in my opinion. I think the diminished arpeggio makes it really cool (I've never managed to use it as well while I'm playing).
     

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