new leaf

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, May 25, 2009.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this new leaf on the vile
    for a while
    hiding behind grill-ends of window
    wispers the monsoon has brought some wetness
    makes admire the shine of youth
    the freshness of yellowish vains
    fingure tips are too rugged to touch
    so caress her lips over the soft, slippery tender offering
    cherish the heavens spending
  2. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    good work....but short.....try adding some punch to it bro.......

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