Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Dec 31, 2011.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Happy new year fellas!

    Sometimes memories lay still in your mind,
    and you feel like you're left behind.

    Not long ago there was a time,
    my pain was yours, your pain was mine.
    O dear, you left your pain behind,
    but thats just me, so, nevermind.

    Days of work and nights awake,
    We lie about our lives mundane.
    Very well, your part can choose to take,
    distances too long two hearts contain.

    But that's my wish, not utterly yours,
    You wait for your love with open doors.
    For moments of love, or moments of fight,
    I dont care if you're here tonight.
    Together we see the darkness fade,
    Together we walk this promenade.

    From the dark of cold to the warmth of light,
    as you amble down the lane tonight.
    O dear, you left your past behind,
    but that's just me, so, nevermind.
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  2. Sumanovo razor

    Sumanovo razor New Member

    nice...very well written...reps to u
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks dude!
  4. Sumanovo razor

    Sumanovo razor New Member

    you're the next rabindranath your father a poet...?
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I'm really honoured buddy.. *tears* thanks!
    I really think tagore was a legend, no one can be like him.
    My father isn't a poet, but i've been writing since school times. It feels good cuz I write about my own life, experiences, sometimes in such metaphors that even ppl who know me don't understand that. It almost amuses me. ;)
  6. wow .. simply awesome

    i loved reading it ..

    but thats just me, so, never-mind :*
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thankie monnie!
    Yea, that's the central idea of the poem..
    everything else is just around that one thing...
  8. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    another beautiful piece.. loved it :)
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Thanks nandita! :)
  10. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    awesome!...I just loved the feel of that last line...careless, yet painful...nevermind!
    great!. reps, if i can

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