need some feedback for my new song....Bloodlust

hi guys this is my new song... I'm on guitar and vocals.....bass n drums are through flstudio....
People who don't like dirty vocals stay away...

Also, I'm not a vocalist i just gave vocals to give an idea of how the final song would sound.....so i know the vocals are bad,,,,,i just need feedback on the overall song....

Finally im looking for a band to jam with....i also play nirvana ,black sabbath rhcp etc...so let me know if anyone's interested.

Bloodlust.mp3 by suraj raval | Song | Free Music, Listen Now

Its got 2-3 other tracks too ...feel free to comment!

 

Awesome work bro!!!
just in some parts of the vocals it feels as if u are falling short of breath.
but all in all its a gud listen!!
keep rockin!! \m/\m/

 

I'm not a fan of screamers. But Good work with Guitar and Other FL Sounds. \m/

 

hey great work there..awesome guitar \m/
Might need little more work on the bass lines....but it cud hav been me, couldnt hear it clearly thru my speakers
and i know u said it urself, but...yeah u'r gona need a new vocalist
\m/ !! The Show Must Go On !! \m/

 

hey great work there..awesome guitar \m/
Might need little more work on the bass lines....but it cud hav been me, couldnt hear it clearly thru my speakers
and i know u said it urself, but...yeah u'r gona need a new vocalist
\m/ !! The Show Must Go On !! \m/

 

yeah thnx a lot guys.... again...im not even a regular vocalist....so screaming was way beyond my realms....but no one really listens to instrumentals so i thot i'd give it a go.....if anyone wants to add in vocals plz let me know .....

 

the guitar u hv used sounds very good...is it real or virtual?

 

its real...I've played the guitar myself.....thnx