need composition for my lyrics......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by idefixe, Feb 1, 2006.

  1. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hi everyone,

    This is my first ever posting and i guess i am starting a new thread.........
    I need someone to compose and find a tune to my lyrics
    Here it goes........... its called "SPACES"


    verse:
    spaces still exixt
    ethched in to the conscious
    have been bought to the fore
    now i can feel the distance

    chorus:
    marooned in a different mood
    everytime i see your face
    undone every time you pass me by
    where u going ,where u going, where ugoing now.............
    where u going ,where u going, where ugoing now.............

    verse:
    torn in to pieces
    wither away slowly
    just as the autumn leaves
    coming apart in silence.


    chorus:
    marooned in a different mood
    everytime i see your face
    undone every time you pass me by
    where u going ,where u going, where ugoing now.............
    where u going ,where u going, where ugoing now..........


    End.
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    within u lies what u seek
    everything u haven't known
    bound with skepticism
    unravel it on your own........
     
  2. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    The lyrics sounds good to me.. dude.. !!
     
  3. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hey,

    thanks for the reply..............
    so do know anyone who can campose
    i guess u are a guitarist................maybe you can do it.

    get back to me..............
    see ya..........
     
  4. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist


    ^^^ Argh !!! wht do u mean by "i guess ur a guitarist" .. anyways.. yeah i can surely try .. but i need to know what kinda composition do u want.. "rock, jazz, etc. etc." .. to be very precise
    and then tell me..

    regards

    sharad kashyap..
     
  5. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hey dude thanks for the reply........
    Now i know for sure that you are a guitarist. i want a rock composition which is kind of not too heavy but relies more on melody.....somethin different.
    I know you will do a good job with it.

    Thanks anyways..........
    Bhaskar
     
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Good work!
     
  7. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Thanks for the comments crptic angel...........need 2 hear more frm u
     
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ya dude, even i was gonna ask the same..wht type og compo u want....a pretty slow or some fast number...pm me abt tht ..dude..il try to compose this one for u....
     
  9. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    this is IGT!!!
    everyone plays the guitar!!!!!!!!!

    use Em ,C ,D ,G

    lot of songs use tat comp.
     
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    thts the structure for zombie....^^ it will become heavy song then....
     
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Well, I liked it, and I feel it will sound good as a song. I can't give music to your words though, someone else here will love to, I'm sure.

    I really loved the other lyrics that you posted: "Self Destruct"
     

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