Hey everyone out there ....need comments for this poetry new to this forum .............just getin 2 knw evry one hoope u'll wil read and reply.......... bye.....for now. The Perfect Summer Summer skies endless bounds Reaching places not been before Searching forests for that enduring light Life’s so amazing Dive in to the Coral waters Revel in the shining sands Some space enchanting Besiege the moment Flapping wings going the distance Flocks of birds Bon voyage Vast spaces and eternal seas Sweating it out the honey bees Grazing cattle on open fields Lost in lovely serenity Rotund mangoes, trudging carts, Afternoon slumber and lemon tarts Holding hands, taking walks, Quietest times and endless talks Wandering freely gone away Precious little moments Longing for the perfect summer
stupendous imagination is all what i can say!!! nice flow...well done all together.( refered my dictionary after a long time though ) i liked it.
hi, thanks sharmom for the comments. really appreciate them................. And everyone out there .....just keep the commnts flowing in........... BYe for now...........
Kool stuff.... "Holding hands, taking walks, Quietest times and endless talks " Nice composition all together. Gud to have another poet here.
