Nature's Reminders....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tumhare_divya, Jan 9, 2006.

  1. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    hey evryone...kinda sad here...(typical divya feeling)...
    ever want to see sumone rite away n couldn't...missd them terribly?...well at this point i wish i had a private jet to take me to my love n e time i wanted....the result of this loneliness=tears ...and a mushy poem.... :shock: ...see below...

    "Nature's Reminders"

    From the earth beneath my feet...to the stars far above...
    All nature reminds me of him that I love...
    As i bid farewell to the sun and its rays...
    Disappearing over the horizon to him at the end of each day...
    I send with it my love...as it leaves me asleep here...
    With warm dreams of that same sun's rays awaking my dear...
    How jealous I am ...of the sun and the moon...
    They hover above him at midnight and noon...
    I envy how they get to look upon him every day...
    A blessing I am deprived of since I live far away...
    Each Night I gaze at those stars....shining bright like his eyes...
    Reflecting his love...boundless like the skies....
    It hurts to be here ...and unable to meet...
    So i send him the sun and all of its heat....
    The countless grains of sand I see on the ground....
    Remind me of the multiple joys in him that i've found...
    When here...missing him...and crying in pain....
    My tears fall upon him as warm monsoon rain...
    Every time the wind blows...gently stroking my face...
    I'm feeling his breath and his loving embrace....
    I watch birds above...enter and become one with the sky...
    Like whenever we talk...the world seems like just him and I...
    The trees grasp the ground... with their roots... and there stay....
    Like my everlasting desire for him... that won't go away...
     
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  2. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    wow!!
    gr8!!
    iam speechless...
     
  3. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    That was amazing...........the poem suits my condition too ;)
    very emotional.........why are u so sad all of a sudden? i just talked to u, and i thought u were feeling ok at that time.............anyway, i am here.....u can share ur sorrows with me :beer:
     
  4. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    i kno i can count on yu...we are best friends aftr all....and now soul sisters...(as corny as that sounds)...who both have our luvs across the ocean...just our luck na?;)...glad you liked the poem dear...
     
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    uff divyaa...!!
    though ur poem is so so so.... gr8...!!!! im gonna accuse you to make me sad too..!
    u made me remember some old pain....!! gawddd..! how can u do that?????

    wud like to share something with you...

    empty eyes
    endless sighs
    uff! this pain..
    i wonder do he feels same like this..
    will he ever know.. how much i miss..!!

    language of love
    some unsaid words
    some unsaid emotions
    a silent whisper.. a silent hiss..
    his tender words.. oh i miss!!

    warmth in hug
    shivers in touch
    desires in mind
    soft caress at the lips..turning into kiss
    its him.. its him.. its him.. i miss!!!

    longing more n more
    but seconds running
    edless attempts to freeze the time
    still..glint in eyes.. heart in bliss..
    oh those moments.. i miss!! i miss!!

    uff!!! i miss too much now.....

    u know....the worst thing in life is...
    to miss someone...endlessly like this..so much...
    but the best thing in life is....

    having someone worth missing like such...
     
  6. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    yes nimisha...in yur own dear words....that come from BOTH our hearts...."its him its him its him i miss!"...(div and nimisha hug and sob together...)

    too tru...missin the one yu luv sucks...but lookin on the bright side ...atleast i hav him in my life...i am blessd...
     
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    lovely poem.. very mushy ;) but nice...
     
  8. khuddusantana

    khuddusantana New Member

    nice poem .... good work ..
     
  9. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    AMAZING is all i can say....
     
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  10. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    AWSOME!!!
    reps t u!
     
  11. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    so sweet..........

    why u 2 so sad lately......well i have a clue though.....
    wish u guys all the love and happines.

    great poem.

    Angela i wonder if even u write.
     
  12. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    i m really speechless..
     
  13. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* and *sighhhhh*
    thats the first time i've sighed to read sum1's poem..i do like and love poem written by others but never so much to make me gloomy :Worried:

    one of the best poems ever posted at IGT with such prominent yet subtle hue of BLUES
    :'( im not touched..im shaken

    do i seem to be exaggerating :annoyed: ...hell..i dont care..i loved this poem!
    m gonna save it in my collections :grin:

    reps coming ur way sweety
    :nw:
     
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    That was an awesome peice of work......
    Its just purrrfect !!
    My favourite song during such times is ... "Wish you were here" from Pink Floyd

    Here is something..... that i wrote... which is not even close to the vicinity of being called good.

    But nevertheles... i thought i would share it here...

    Cherished memories of our past
    cherished memories will forever last

    In times of sorrow, in times of grief
    cherished memories shall bring relief

    Cherished memories today flood my mind
    so pleasant, so good, refreshing and kind

    Cherish these memories with no regrets
    cherished thoughts are hard to forget
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    No words of praise wud do justice to this poem.....wud just like to say..."All The Best"...hez a lucky man to hv found u :)
    keep smiling.....
     
  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    uff cant rep u :mad:....
     
  17. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    thank you all for the compliments....whoa vini didi...my poem tuchd yu that much :shock: ...n e how...i am glad it conveyed the emotion....

    ...when we miss our luvs...we get sad...its onlee natural...yu see he's already in my heart....but i want him in my arms....missin him too much...

    :think: Hey yu guys?...whatothr things in nature wouldve been good to include in the poem?? :think: ...any of yu get reminded of special people by things yu see evryday?...like what???
     
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  18. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Fabulous...a very beautiful poem...Divya Ji ! Great job you have done.

    Keep it up and take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     

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