Okay,its an apt title for this poem.Its about a guy crazily in love with his wife...a bit too crazy though. Nasamajh Dil Mujhe yaad hai woh pehli mulakat saath jo thi woh hawaaye woh halki barsaat. Kehte they sab mujhse Ki tumhe mujhse pyaar nahi tha maine kisiki kabhi na sooni kyonki mujhe tumse pyaar tha. Mujhe nahi pata kab mera pyaar kam pad gaya kab tumhari mohabbat nafrat ka saaya ban gaya. Phir bhi yeh dil tumhi se pyaar karega Tumhi ke liye jeeyega Tumhi ke liye marega Shayad tumko na tha mere pyaar par yakeen Shayad tumhe pyaar hi na tha mujhse kabhi Isi liye shayad dhadkane dheemi ho rahi hai na jaane kyon ek ajeeb thand mahsoos ho rahi hai. Rokar tumne khud hi bata diya ki tumne hi mujhe jehar pila diya Lekin ajeeeb dil hai yeh Ab tak tumse khafa nahi Ishq kiya hai isne tumse Tumhare haaton se marna is dil ke liye koi saja nahi. Dam ghoot raha hai ab, dhadkane ghat gai dekhar tumhe ek akhri baar Is nasamajh dil se phir bhi ek muskaan jaag oothi....
ye thik nahi hai ..though the thought line u went with is ok..but way of expression is not good ..explore words ...good words .. silent words which scream .. innocent words who stare...real words who cry in her eye's when u die...Aisa kuch hope u got got me !
I did get your point but basically I didn't want people to feel for this guy,instead I wanted them to pity his stupidity. But yeah,I should explore new words,phrases.
