'Napaak Meri Chaahat Nahin...!'

Jab se logon ne kaha tumse ki meri chaahat teri kaabiliyat nahin
Tab se meine apne dil ko samjhaaya ki hamari koyi hasiyat nahin

Keisse bataoun kissi ko ki aaj kitni zakhmi houi hai ye haalat meri
Lagta hai Khouda ne kaha mujhse ki ab chahiye teri ibadat nahin...

Mein sirf ek tanha rahi houn,saath liye phirta houn wahshat meri
Kayi baar toum ko samjhaya bhi meine ki meri koyi keemat nahin...

Apni ankhein to kholo,saaf nazar aayegi tumhein har asliyat meri
Yakeen karo tumhare apnon par,ounki ek bhi alfaaz ghalat nahin...

Pal rahi hai jo aaj tere sine main, hogi kissi janam ki amaanat meri
Toum sitaara bani aur mein dhoul raha, abhi milan ki ijaazat nahin...

Teri hi khayalon main khokar kalaam likhna bangayi thi aadat meri
Dil se aaj samjhauta kiya humne ki ab inhein deinge daawat nahin...

Tumhari chaahat ko dagaa dein, sach maano!Ye nahin niyyat meri
Jisse apne rouh main basa liya humne, wo kabhi hogi ruksat nahin...

Diqqat agar tujh ko na ho to kabhi lauta dena pyaar ki dawlat meri
Varna hum yahi kaheinge Uparwaale ki tujh main insaaniyat nahin...

Chaar akshar tere naam ke paaye 'Amanush' main, khili kismat meri
Khouda ki iss inaayat ko dekh kar shikaayat karne ki himmat nahin...

Wahshat : Loneliness
Daawat : Invitation
Niyyat : Intention
Diqqat : Difficulty

Amanush...

 

what a poem/ghazal ! ...

man did u try filling music in it?

 

wow...***claps** awesome stuff dude.....yea try fillin music in it,.....

 

Hamein sangeet likhna nahin aata hai...dosto! I own a guitar and I am afraid
to even touch it.

I just wish I could

:

 

first of all ... kahan se ho bhai?

 

wow aamanush...u just too good re....

 

wow Amanush... Really nice i guess we can ask the admin to create a forum for Shayari as well, because you see two or four liners are really very impressive.. But still no credits taken away from your poem as its really very nioce

 

Weisse 'Jiss desh main Ganga behti hai' se nahin hein hum...
par itna zarour keh sakte hein ki hum ouss desh ke vaasi hein
jahan 'Ganga Taalaab' hai.

I am from Mauritius...Bhai!

 

Thank you so much...Screwdriver!

Take care of yourself

 

Thanks for appreciating and also for your nice comments...Tonan!

Take good care of yourself

Amanush...

 

mauritius ...
wow ...
then u must be knowing french also?

and one more thing ...
what is the inspiration of al these poems?
is it all those sexy tourists u get there :grin: ?

 

Yes, I know french too...! Would you like to read some of my french poems too ?

Nowadays I am living in Italy, and I really miss those :secret: tourists

And maybe I can say that Love and Life are the inspirations of the poems!



Amanush...

 

wow....u write in french too....but i dont think many of us wil understand french....but .....vous etes tres bien..... :think: i think :think: ......

 

tooo goood amanush... :beer:


is ur real name Amanush ?? :shock:

 

Really great shyari hotshot i totally love it, its so unique!!!!!!!!!

 

Oui, Srcewdriver...|ça va,Je suis très bien, et vous ?

Un poeme en français pour ceux qui peuvent comprendre :

Aujourd'hui un sourire
demain un souvenir
à ma mort un regret
sur ma tombe un larme
Mais n'oublie jamais
que j'étais ton amour



Amanush...

 

Thanks...Vishwa! Amanush, and Mushkil are only my takhallus! I am called Danny

 

Thanks so much for liking this one too...Jessica!

Take care and keep coming



Amanush...

 

bhayya aap italy mein hain ...
tahts gr8 ... to phir to italian bhi aa gayee hogi ...
wow man u are a chalta phirta UN language translator ... u know spanish and german too?
i know some german

anyway to tell ya truth ... my sis took up french so i just know a few words ... i couldn't make out anything of your poem .... ... jsut know tha maour has something to do with love (or is it lust?) :grin:

anyway am waiting for the translation too :grin:

 

Aujourd'hui un sourire
demain un souvenir
à ma mort un regret
sur ma tombe un larme
Mais n'oublie jamais
que j'étais ton amour

Translation :

Today a smile
tomorrow a remembrance
When I'll be no more, a regret
On my grave, a drop of tear...
But don't ever forget
that I was your love

Ji han...Slayer! Hamein thoDi si Italian bhi aati hai.
Unfortunately I know neither German nor Spanish, But
I love spanish songs very much...

Take care

Amanush...