na tera maan na mera maan

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Jan 28, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    adore or abhor
    but i will not bore u all more
    last one knockiing at ur door

    Title: na tera maan na mera maan

    Ranjishee kuch uun huii, ek hi nazam ke lavazoon main
    ki upaar likhee sher ne, nichee valle ko mita diya

    baat aapas ki thi to hum ne kuch nahi aage likhaa
    kunn bhadaye tension, sab unhii rehne diyaa

    phir beete din kayee, sher akeela hi raha
    bhaad gayi khaamoshi aur tanhaiyee ne uss se kaha

    ban ke gazal, kisi ke hootoon pe sajta
    dillon me rehta, khaaboon pe chalta
    kisi ki ankoo main chamakta
    to kisi ke angadayee main machalta ...

    ja apne shayar se keh, likh ke de ek aur dhullan
    avaaragi se bharta nahi, na tera maan na mera maan
     
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    not bad!

    why do u write crap when u can do better? this is quite alright :)

    and.. u shouldnt have used an english word in there
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Guess.....
     

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