adore or abhor but i will not bore u all more last one knockiing at ur door Title: na tera maan na mera maan Ranjishee kuch uun huii, ek hi nazam ke lavazoon main ki upaar likhee sher ne, nichee valle ko mita diya baat aapas ki thi to hum ne kuch nahi aage likhaa kunn bhadaye tension, sab unhii rehne diyaa phir beete din kayee, sher akeela hi raha bhaad gayi khaamoshi aur tanhaiyee ne uss se kaha ban ke gazal, kisi ke hootoon pe sajta dillon me rehta, khaaboon pe chalta kisi ki ankoo main chamakta to kisi ke angadayee main machalta ... ja apne shayar se keh, likh ke de ek aur dhullan avaaragi se bharta nahi, na tera maan na mera maan
not bad! why do u write crap when u can do better? this is quite alright and.. u shouldnt have used an english word in there