My Very First English Song That i wrote,,,

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Priyank_Jal_fan, Jan 24, 2006.

  1. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    HATE --by priyank_jal_fan

    Dont need you
    dont need them
    fight everyday
    love again

    Died everynight
    born everyday
    doped everytime
    and changed again


    Verse 2--------
    So tell me what you think right now
    am I mad or just sick of you

    Verse 3-----------
    Love is changing me everyday
    ****ed to see you here everyday
    cared of nothing what you said
    just hate you.....HATE YOU AGAIN

    Love is changing me everyday
    ****ed to see you here everyday
    lost all peace of mind
    I am cheating death and cheating it again








    please telll me how it is.......... any comment welcomed
     
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    sounds kinda punk to me!

    maybe coz of greenday's song in which they say smthng like: am i paranoid or am i just stoned?!
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    so much of hate..!!
     
  4. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    yup!!! wait till you hear my rec. of this song cryptic_angel.....

    y'll change your mind then... may look punk on paper but surely sounds ,,,, Hate......
     
  5. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    HEY NIMISHA U ALL WAYS TALK ABOUT LOVE!!! HOW CAN U BE SO HAPPY AND LOVABLE ALL THE TIME.???
    I ALWAYS LOVE HATING
    AND YOU LOVE DATING( u know who i m taking about!!)
     
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    no i dunno.....
    lemme know tooo plz..........................
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    toooo good reps comming ur way.....

    Dard mere jakhm main hoota hai to maza aata hai
    Koi usse dhek ke jalta hai to maja aata hai
    jab saan saath nahi deti, kisi ki dhankan ka
    Usee Ek aur punch lagta hai to maja aata hai !!

    BUT
    alll kinds of people r needed dude.............kushi bhi seductive hai ....taste hona chaahiyee
     
  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    can any one tell me how to rep .........what is this rep??
    plzzzzz
     
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    got it ...thanks
     
  10. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    Thanks Madhuresh.....
    By Good Work Is Not Finished Yet
    I M Posting A New Lyrics ... Check It Out Man
    Please Comment!!
     
  11. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    gr8 going dude.. :rockon:
     
  12. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    my reps please any body??
     
  13. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    hey check out this songs rec. i m soon going to post its link
     
  14. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    Hello..... I M Back
     
  15. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    tum aaye per recording saath na laye...whyyyyyyyy
     
  16. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    hey priyank do you come at 2:30 PM everyday :cool:
     
  17. prashant_soni14

    prashant_soni14 New Member

    Jakham who nahi jo jism me dikta hai,
    Dard who nahi jo har waqt dhukta hai,
    mhohabt ko to bdnam har koi kar deta hai,
    mhohabat ka surura to jab diktha hai,
    jab eke nahi har lamaha har jaanam
    koi is ki naam kar deta hai,
    dil tuta ho per bhe haasna eke shaan hai
    ye who jaam hai jo har ko naasheeb nahi hota hai.
     
  18. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    chi chi chi!!!
     

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