i stare wen i hear ur laughter 4 its like chimes i stare at those lips 4 dey move in a flow of sm rhyme... ur eyes twinkle nd i know ecstacy i feel it nd den i am far away 4m all worlds misery... i bless dat wind dat blows ur hair away 4m ur face i bless it 4 it sets my love ablaze... my heart skips a beat wen u suddenly luk up at me i stand still...i freeze too overwhelmed to go away or to flee... u stare a me nd i tremble u want me to say smthing..but to say a word i need my thots to assemble... u smile nd move away i dun even blink nd watch u past sway... i know dat i'd never b able to say nythin' i can only hope dat u understand .... all my unspoken words....my unheard laughter....my unflowed tears...nd my unexpressed love.... smtym.....smday......
wow!!! flows like a river, amazing imagery ... and this is something that everyone can associate themselves with. Love it. Just one bit of advice ... dont use short words like "dem" for "them", "wen" for "when", "4" for "for", it really kills the poem and is not correct way of expression. waiting for another one from you.
