My Tulips

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Rey1970, Feb 4, 2005.

  1. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    If I fail to realize the facts,
    that face my eyes,
    It's only because
    my vision is clouded
    by the millions of tulips
    that surround me.
    If I refuse to see
    all that's destined for me,
    and put up a fight,
    to try profusely
    to set wrongs right,
    Forgive me,
    my speech is slurred,
    my thoughts are blurred,
    by the sweetness of tulips
    that cascade over me.
    Ever pretty
    you never hide,
    you stand so silent
    at my side.
    You are the magic,
    the color,
    you are the love
    that keeps me alive.
     
  2. skaw

    skaw snooze

    hey rey .. gud stuff .. i liked it :)
     
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Nice. I Like it. Good work.
     
  4. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    thanks you 'll ...............glad you'll enjoying them i'll post more.........
     
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    IGT has got an excellent poet.
     
  6. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I've visited ur site long before and reallly it's koooooooooooolz.
     
  8. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    i liked this one a lot.. i like evrythin tht relates 2 a flower.. tulips r nice :)
     
  9. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    man its really nice....i liked it a lot:)
     
  10. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    hey, I'm a girl....rey is my husband...thanks
     
  11. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    lol man was just a general comment...meh nm lol
     
  12. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    ok.....post more of your poems, i am enjoying them
     
  13. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    lol erm ok! but urz r pretty cool too
     
  14. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    thanks....
     
  15. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Rey might me ur husband's name but here we are gonna call U Rey coz it's ur ID. :)
     
  16. daffodil

    daffodil bright little flower

    aww .... this poem is so cute ........
     
  17. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    ya it is.. :)
    also this shud be ur fav i guess..
    u got company now... tulips n daffodils :)
     
  18. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    thanks...daffodil.
     

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