back with a serious one...got time during the lec today...been long since i did a serious number.....:dance: THE UNKNOWN the doors are closed, its dark around, the world seems to move, as i walk in the unknown. tangled faces, keep on looking at me, i search for the bright light, wich can guide me. the air has become heavy, and has created a lull, uncertainties surround, as i keep walkin in the unknown. The unknown- is all ive been trying to find, as i still keep walkin, its thoughts seem to tear down my mind.....
:banana: yaay ...m the first one to reply.... bk in serious mode....Nice work good to see frm a crappiest poet like u :
thx for replyinnnn...ya man..got time..socha ek serious likhde..waise bhi i haf written some crappy ones for u peeople to torture next...heheh...filhal this is for ur logon ka peace of mind....coz the next will be a brain torcher...hehe.....thx again garryyy...
haha....wich one ya want ?? i give u choice..leavin on 9.35 or injection lagwaya aapne....u r gonna curse me wen u l read those .....hehehe..newayz for ur office...
^^ sahi jawab..dekha the effect of readin my crappy poems..tu bhi usi line pe chal reli hain bhidu......
Kya baat hai.. garima n abhi ka chat session chal raha hai : ok.. Off topic !! Good one abhi.. Kya baat hai.. bacha sudhar raha hai??
Hmm.. not a bad effort, but.. it's kinda ordinary, felt like you wrote it for the heck of writing something serious.
^^ na re..it wasnt intended jus to write serious..actually wen i went to write this word flashed across UNKNOWN..so i wrote whatever came first to my mind....aur daal diya...yaar mera poems short and sort of simple..wont be much compli re...but thx for readin....and werz ur poemssss???? get them on......
Abhi..chhupa rustom. whats this huh? howcome suddenly serious mood its good dude..you can write no-nonsense stuff hope to see more of that kind
^^ haha...no chupa rustam...its jus tht im gonna put serious after one crap poem...and im moslty gonna do originals now..so they l be mostly simple and short...........
ya man....^^..but crypes ,man i m really sad ki u r quitiin writin..........yaar il miss ur poems yaar a lotttttttttttttttttttttttt...............
