MY :: THE INDIAN RAIL (eeks..back to school dayz )

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhimanjrekar, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    :p: hehe....this is a kiddish poem i have to say..the indian railwayz has made me their im advertising for them.........actually thers a story behind this poem.....i recently went to goa in the train..(( aw i hate trains actually,but had to )) and my discman batteries went dead of a sudden and i wasnt findin my spare the train had only few stops i had to wait a long time to reach the next station and get some batteries....durin tht time,i wrote this whatever came to my mind,sitting beside the window and lookin at the chubbly girl across 2 seats :p:

    so doston, zulm sehne ke liye taiyar ho jaaao......1..2..3...


    Racing with the winds at par,
    The lush greens waving around,
    The horizon that seems to go on.

    Through folds of darkness,
    And showers of rain,
    It ditches the tricky areas,
    Without any pain.

    The looks;
    The views;
    What a magnificient sights they r-
    The world seems in a daze,
    Wen u pass them at 100 km per hour.. :aggre:

    Its the journey of lifetime,
    Which hardly fails,
    Yes, i have to say-
    I had been in the indian rail,
    I had been in the indian rail.......... :beer:

    (( any igtian in INDIAN RAILWAYS,consider some concession for me on readin this ))

    rest plz don bang ur heads..... :rock:
    nimisha and BubblyMartini like this.
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    cute poem:)
    i love travelling by train..liked this poem
    brings back old memories

    reps for ur dude..
    Write a poem on Goa someday
  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    wow....good to see u took pains readin my poem..and il fulfil ur request also..........thx bubbly..psst psst :: GOA is my native palce......
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i know.. thats why i asked u to:)
  5. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ive put it it....
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    LOL.. ur poems make me laugh! this one's also cute like the goa one :)

    I LOOOOOOOOOVE travelling by trains!! ofcourse, company matters :)
  7. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ write more poems to make u laugh now...and ya company does matter a lot......imagine 14 hrs with a old couple ...and those same hrs with a lovely gal in ur front.....waaaa................the journey should go on and on....heheh......thx again crypes...

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