need some feedback on the solo ive just done..its only just a draft as yet..so u're more than welcome to have a go at me! : as long as its constructive! https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=344106 click on ' solodraft' thanx.
thanx for the reply ..appreciate it..i'm not totally convinced ..need more comments! yeah the song is just somethign im working on thats the only thing ive done so far for it. so got a long way ahead
it seems like u were trying the little fast lick of wujud solo..........n ended up recording this ? lol
@aka oz: thanx. @khuram: err..no! i was hopign someone wud come up with some more criticism than what ive just got.....anyone got any suggestions?
I didn't like it much. The licks were too uni-dimensional for me. They got predicatable as you went along. The basic problem, from what I can see, is lack of variation in rythm. You're playing on the 1-2-3-4 and never doing anything different....it's either sixteenth notes or eighths and you're not really letting a couple of beats go unless it's for the break in between licks....never a lick with a break within it. Stuff like that. The original lick with which you start off is quite nice but it's not backed up well by the rest of your solo.
thanx bjr: will give it another shot..soon..thing is i reaslised that as well ..i wanted to hear it from someone else...one ofmy friends said it gets abit monotonous in the middle which i think is true as well. yes the only thign i am happy about is the start lick lol (to be very very honest) anyhow appreciate it.)
sounded nice, ima newbie but to me didnt sound that smooth in parts...as in like one part follows on from the next, but what the heck thats my opinion, was sweet tho
thanx for the replies guys..i think it seems like i need to do it again.! just really tight on time.anyhow. thanx once again.