My second song

second one...plz comment


teri yaadien
hoon gee na kabhi kum
tu jab yaad aye
bhola do mein saarey gum
tu jab aye
to mit jaye sarey gum

yeh jo lamhe hein
yeh muskello se guzre hein
yeh jo pal hein
unhay bitta na sakey hum
tu jo chahay to
bhula doon mein sarey gum

yeh yaad sata-ey teri
zindayi katey na meri
yeh armaan sarey meray
porey hoon ge kabhi

yeh yaadien pori nahi
yeh khaab adhoray nahi
yeh armaan sarey merey
porey hoon ge kabhi

hoon ge porey kabhi
hoon ge porey kabhi
hoon ge porey kabhi………..

 

not bad in fact really good.............GREAT!!

 

thnx a bunch!

 

good yaaaaaaar

 

@ ali akber....try n make ur own lyrics... (copied from ik dinayega by jal)

 

^ ur one step ahead of me; was gonna say the same thing.

and i thought the first song was lame.

 

yea...i dnt reali no wat was that thing.

 

yaar this is only my second one...and i only made it cuz i was bored...wese i will try to make a better one tonight...thnx for the response