This song is an outstanding composition... check out my recording at www.soundclick.com/smitzonianvocals
Well done Smitzonian, just like your voice and also the way you sing, you're a very good singer. One thing you have to pay some more attention, your "taal" isn't very good in this song, it fluctuates, as sometimes you are just out of the rhythm, just try to improve that! Overall, very good!!!
smit uve got a good voice but i think ul need to groom that voice... coz it gets flat at times like in the song tere bina.....