My Own Composition ::: Return the favoR!!!

this is another of my own ORIGINAL compositions!!! the guitars are overlappin - 5 overlaps - spot them if u can!!!
this is my most proffesional and BEST recordings byfar till now - so please do not ignore it!!! the vocals are as follows*:-

*this is cuz i kno there are gonna be posts like "i cudnt understand the vocals though..."


The Governments bent on Fuking us up [x2]
The least that we can do
The Least that we can really do
Is **** them up too [x2]
YeAH!
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so i hope u like it - i know it sounds like sumfin outta carribean 70's or watever - but i like it - and it took me the whole of todays evenin to make - so u BETTER like it!!!
regards Fatty
Link ::: https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=493287&songID=3661988

 

muhahahhahahahaha the lyrics really made me laugh

but the music was good
hey how do u add those features like drums n so on in ur playing??

 

Hey cool why ru always after the govt ?

 

arent we all = the govt's corrupt and its full of dirty nutso's in dhoti's - with mouthful of PAN and - intent on raping our country and filling their pockets - and the fact that really gets me werked up is that they get away wid it too!!!
so thats that..
@spygame - yeah thanx- did think them up a long time ago - they were even there in this earlier post i had abut the varanasi bomb blasts...so watever - the beats and all are thru this software i got called HipHop eJay - it kicks ass!!! i can send u a copy if u want...pm me abut that...
so - just basically thanx fer lookin it up...

 

oh my.... holy lord, that shit is wicked, yo !!! This is quite impressive since its your own compo! but yeah, I am still laughing my ass off on the lyrics. You're absolutely right .. ****'em up too : . ****in Bastards (the way the british say... like B(aa)stards)

 

U rock baby... i mean remind me of kids in "Detroit the rock city". awesome beats n stuff n was tht u pumping up the electick guitar (nirvana type), tht was kool. u shud hv really screamed at "fuked them up too" . i liked it..

 

djcrunkmix and sachoo =- thanx dudes -- even tho it wasnt that good - yeh - the vocals are where its lackin - but hey - i aint a vocalist anewez...have done anoda version of it - increased distortion - accented beats and lesser bass in the vocals - so its much cleared up - will update it l8er....
secondly - as far as screamin goes - i cant really scream **** when my parents are in the next room...see? hey - how bout this - fer the good vocalists out there - i'll provide the instrumentals of this song --- minus vocals - and someone else sing more betterly on it??? aneone game...
i'll check out Detroit the rock city - thanx fer the comparision tho...

 

ok - this is a thing from a flash vdo im werking for for this song...so heres a pic...yep - the fat kid's me...

 

MESSAGE - updated the song to better version...so plz check it out now!
:rock:

 

anyone else intrstd in posting sumthing abut this song???

 

ok....sounds kinda reggaeish in the begining.....goes on to remind me a bit of limp bizkit....
the recording quality could be beter....again...vox arent too clear

 

L I M P.....B I Z K I T​

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but thanx fer replying - hey - wat duz everyone have wid my recording quality - i mean - am as pro at this as -umm - a fish at kickin bums...or can fish kick bums???...no wait...as pro as a....unhhhh...ummm.:annoyed:..mummble-jummble....as a....or rather....as einstien was at staying a virgin - his average ***rate comes to bout 3 times a day of his whole adult life...:grin:

 

I heard it but i guess my comments arnt valid because songs of this genre never appealed to me. All i will say is to try and add variety to the song rather than sticking to the age old formula of song writing.

 

@dennis - cudnt get wat u mean...elaborate plzz -- but hey - course ur words o wisdom are valid...watever thanx fer takin a loook

 

c'mon..u should have prolonged the audio a bit more..not that i mean u shud've added more lyrics..u could have added a long guitar solo continuing after that verse for say.. 1 minute atleast!
anyways..not bad! i want to hear more of ur vocals in coming recordings and not to forget more of guitar..plain guitaring!

 

thanx vini - well lets face it - i suck at soloing - so no use fer that - add to that the fact that im lazy - and u get really short recordings....so thanx anewez...u busy wid ur exams or sumfin - cuz i dun see many of ur posts or recs around
and did i actually say that u were a child of god??? :shock:::annoyed: seems im permanently drunk....:drunk:

 

What he said. (but doesnt mean the song is bad or whatever).


And the lyrics remind me of PDV's gutterment. (i disagree with those but it gave me a laugh anyway )

 

lol
ok
asgasg

 

so is aneone intrested in commeting abut this...??? :yawn: