hey guys, this is one of my own songs composed for ....... mmmm u know who !! Song Name: Aye mere khuda Composed: Deep Jay Guitar: Deep Jay Vocals: Deep jay Lyrics: Deep Jay Link : https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=522000 let me know !! :think:
As the person above pointed out, the mixing could have been done a bit better. The voice wasnt really audible. But apart from that this song had all the makings of a typical stereotyped hindi pop song. Add some drums, bass and other effects and you have a song. I cant really critique the voice because i would like to hear it more. Show a bit of versatility in your singing ability, just not doing a monotone. Overall, i have to say, good effort for a newbie, I can never hope to do something like this. Nicely done!
Hey, thanks guys ....i just did for someone ... and now i think i would like to move on...... and i'try to better next timethanks again